What a Difference
“I’ve pinpointed the place, the time, the man. Permission to travel, sir?”
“You know this is against all the laws of time travel.”
“Yes, sir. Even still, permission to travel?”
“It can’t possibly work, Adams. If by some miracle you should succeed, your ‘slight change’ might destroy everything we know.”
“There’s no other choice. Everything we know is endangered as it is. We have to try, sir.”
“Are you sure you want to take this risk?”
Ensign Adams looked directly into the Captain’s eyes, seeing his fear but also a glimmer of hope.
“I’m sure, sir. Permission to travel?”
“Permission granted.”
While Ensign Penelope Adams prepared to travel, the Captain reviewed her notes. She had omitted all specific details, so that the Overseers wouldn’t be able to find her if anything went wrong. Even the Captain didn’t know exactly where she was going, or what year she would visit. He scanned the summary one last time.
“At that time, the electric car was far more popular than the gas-powered vehicle. A race between Henry Ford’s car and the streamlined electric car, the Silver Bullet, was attended by a consortium of investors. The Silver Bullet easily won the race, and gained enough investors to go public and begin production. We now know that the largest investor was secretly in the pay of the oil companies. Later that day he bought out all the controlling shares, transferred his investments to Ford and put the plans for the electric car on the shelf.”
The plan was simple: change the actions of one man on one day – stop that investor. Without the venture capital, Henry Ford and his noisy, dirty gas-guzzler would fade into obscurity. The Captain had to admit it was worth a try.
Penelope knew that if she succeeded she might also wipe out that bit of history that had led to her own birth. Saving the planet might mean that she herself would cease to exist. To put the world on a path of clean transportation seemed a worthy exchange.
She stepped into her time machine and spun the dials.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA time-travel story with big ideas, high stakes, and a clever strategy. Would love to see this one in longer form! Hopeful ending. Good mix of past (Henry Ford) and future (time travel). Fun proposition!

Many congratulations, Fuji! Great story! ?
I’ll second that, another great story! Congratulations, Fuji!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHow I wish this story could really happen. Thank you Fuji for letting us imagine, even for a moment, an alternative present.
I also enjoyed imagining a present with electric cars instead of fossil-fuel guzzlers. The other day I followed a UPS truck for a few miles that was spewing out black smoke. It was so bad that my friend who was driving could barely see the road. We thought we were going to have to pull off onto the first side road or shoulder, but thank heavens the UPS truck turned into an… Read more »
How I wish the invention of the electric car continued and not hidden in the cabinet. Because that invention will help a lot not to ruin the world because it will reduce air pollution and reduce the expenses of humans for their treatment due to the diseases they get from air pollution and also the fueling expenses of their vehicles. I am thinking that it was nice to get into that time… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you Lotchie, for your heartfelt response to this story. I don’t think Henry Ford or the oil companies of that time knew anything about the consequences of burning fossil fuels, so we can’t really turn them into villians, much as I would like to. Does anyone know when people first became aware of the environmental effects of fossil fuels? @Alan Kemister, you seem to be our leading expert on climate change.… Read more »
You’re welcome, Fuji. ✌ Sending my apologies to Henry Ford, Fuji.
I love time travel stories Fuji, so liked this take on one. Very clever not to go for the obvious e.g direct action against Ford, but aim for the more sinister forces behind him. It did leave me wondering what the world might have been like if fossil fuel hadn’t been the ‘go to’ source of energy, but as you point out, in that day/age the potential impact, may not have been… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThe research I did for my other climate story, Clean Sweep, said there are currently 1.4 billion cars on the road today running on fossil fuels. Henry Ford and his generation couldn’t have possibly imagined that many people, much less that many vehicles. I can’t even imagine it and I live in the here and now!
The term ‘money talks’ immediately came to mind when reading your story Fuji. I wonder what else has been influenced over the years, the tobacco industry for instance. Time travel is such an exciting subject and your story really drew me in. What a hero you have created in Ensign Penelope Adams (love the name) and what an amazing mission. If only…
You are so right, Linda. Money talks for sure – then as now. I just read, with horror, that the U.S. senator in charge of budget for climate change earned half a million dollars last year from his interests in coal. Sometimes this world seems surreal – do you think perhaps we’re all having a collective nightmare and may wake up soon? One can always hope.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI was indeed touched by the paragraph penultimate to the last. I love time travel stories. I wrote one of recent. I’m still waiting for its approval. Nice story, Fuji.
Thank you Thompson! I look forward to reading anything new you write!
I loved this time travel story! Penelope is ready to sacrifice her very existence in order to save the world. I loved the picture so much, it made me think about the car from ‘Back to the Future’ (only cuter!). Sometimes we concentrate exclusively on the story, without picking up the significance behind the picture, right?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello Greene. I’m thrilled that you loved the picture – I spent a lot of time trying to find the perfect one. The one I used is an actual photo of a car in the Henry Ford museum that was one of his first cars ever. I loved the colors, the luxurious seats, and the lovely symmetry. Too bad it wasn’t electric.
Fuji, this is such a lovely story. I liked how your protagonist was willing to possibly sacrifice herself for others to survive. I really like the picture of the car too. If only we could turn back time and right our wrongs.
Thank you so much Marianna. Yes, hindsight is such an amazing view. If only …
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleLove this story Fuji, though I’ve always loved time travel stories. You’ve done this so well, and I love that your protagonist is aware of the issues around whatever she does threatening her own existence. Until you get into the paradoxical argument that she’s there now to travel back in time. It’s something that is already happening in her life, therefore, she has to exist for it to happen. It makes your… Read more »
Yes, the ramifications of time travel can certainly make one’s head spin! However, if you accept parallel universes, newly created when needed, it becomes easier to absorb. Penelope might still exist in the universe she is travelling from, but perhaps not in the parallel one she is helping to create. Or perhaps she will begin to exist as someone different, someone resulting from the changes her old self created. Ha! More head… Read more »
An intriguing and very well-written story, Fuji! Like your protagonist, you have done a thorough job, identifying the problem and aiming for it in an eloquent way. Knowing your concern with details in your stories, I was wondering about the name of your protagonist. Are Penelope’s initials connected to EPA – the Environmental Protection Agency? I also learned a new English word in your story: Ensign. My dictionary says that besides being… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you so much for your insightful comments, Christer. I very carefully picked my heroine’s name – the “Ensign” part was especially purposeful for the exact reasons you outlined. I didn’t realize however until the story was published and I was reading it again that her initials were EPA. I laughed out loud – the spirit world certainly has a way of helping us out when we least expect it!! As you… Read more »
Hello Fuji, very interesting basis for a story. There have been many forays into electric vehicles from the late 19th century to the present. Interesting idea to have someone go back to the early 1900s and influence history so that an electric car got a better chance to succeed. The twentieth century automotive world did seem to always have it in for electric cars. In recent years the 1990s GM effort to… Read more »
Hello Alan – Interestingly enough, the 1990 GM project you mentioned was the basis of my research for this story. No one knows why that project folded and why they destroyed those incredible vehicles, but I can’t help but think that oil companies were behind it. There were people who loved those prototype vehicles and offered big bucks to buy one, but instead they were scrapped somewhere out in the desert. As… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations on winning the Grand Prize Fuji, I loved your story and I’m so pleased for you.
Thanks, Linda!
Wow! Congratulations on winning the grand prize, Fuji. I am so happy for you.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks Lotchie!
You’re most welcome, Fuji.
Congratulations, Fuji! A clever and courageous mission which ended with great success.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks, Christer. By the way, I know how you often see the meanings of names and titles, so here’s the song that inspired this title:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OmBxVfQTuvI
Thanks for sharing that piece of information, Fuji! It’s a wonderful song and it brings up a specific memory for me. When I came to Wisconsin and the US, I took all kinds of jobs just to earn some money and survive, including delivering pizza for a couple of months. A young man called Dan had opened his own place, Danny’s Diner, with the help of his retired father. The father helped… Read more »
Christer, that is an absolutely wonderful story. You have such a rich trove of memories. Such a well-lived life. Now I know why I sent you a link to the song – just to hear another one of your fabulous stories!!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations Fuji. A well-deserved win. The first entry taking the first prize. ?
That is interesting. I looked back, and sure enough this story was the first entry! Thanks for reading and for noticing small details, the way a writer should!!
Fuji, I feel so happy to be re-reading this time travel story from you. Nice one. Congratulations on being featured in the next contest.
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