
Mister Raccoon Please Drink the Water
Where were you when 2074’s record heat wave gripped the planet? I was camped in the boreal forest. In Siberia, to be exact. I felt wilted standing in the dark beneath the towering black spruce tree. The air, thick with heat made it near impossible to breathe. As sweat pooled on my body, I listened for the birds but heard nary a thing— the woods appeared birdless for quite some time. Suddenly a raccoon, gaunt and panting, appeared from behind a mountain alder. I poured the last of my water in the crevice of a small rock and dismantled my lean-to. Siberian winters are different now… everything is.
I couldn’t muster up the energy to move along because my muscles were beginning to seize up. I wanted to cry but my tears wouldn’t come. It all weighed heavy on my shoulders after that point. I once dreamt of cruising the coast of Lisbon and dancing under the Aurora Borealis but such things as these were no longer possible.
Ice sheets have all melted.
Humanity has run out of time.
The cries of help from the government, when it had to do with climate change, have long ago been silenced. The United Nation’s most intelligent researchers had given us ten years. Ten years to find a solution, ten years to reverse the damage done to our planet. But those that tried to brace themselves were painted with the ‘fake news’ brush. And the others, they ignored such solid scientific proof— they’ve long ago perished.
The raccoon stared at me with those beady eyes. He hadn’t touched the water. It was almost as if he felt empathy for me; he had no reason to.
The heat became too much.
My eyes grew heavy.
I laid down.
Bees dying, ants walling themselves in and endless dark. We all had a choice but failed the very place that gave us life. I also had a part in the death of this planet of mine. And knowing that, I let go of life as well.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA dark view into the future. The description of the earth and the main character’s despair is powerful.

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The little touches in this story are very moving, Melissa. The “raccoon, gaunt and panting” tells more than extensive descriptions could. We feel the little fella’s desperation and we so want him to drink. One of the protagonist’s last gestures is to share her water – we feel the beauty of the human spirit come through in spite of unbearable circumstances. This is good writing and will stay with the reader for… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks for taking the time to read my story, Fuji. When writing this I had a particular feeling wash over me. What about the animals, I thought. I feel like humans go about their daily business of tearing down land to build houses. We litter, we congest the highways but we seemingly forget about the animals and how all of this affects them. It’s incredibly sad. They haven’t the voice to advocate… Read more »
Hello, Melissa. This story is very touching. I also swallowed saliva while reading, feeling the intense thirst of the protagonist and the raccoon. And I also peeked at the boreal forest on the internet, and I found out that it is also called the Taiga and has been called the largest earth biome in the world. Well done.
Hello, Lotchie. Thanks again for taking the time to comment. A hot Siberian winter would be a scary reality would it not? Taiga Forrest is generally referred to in North America as a ‘boreal Forrest’ or ‘snow Forrest.’ And during the last quarter of the twentieth century, the zone of latitude that is occupied by the boreal forest has experienced some of the greatest temperature increases on Earth. Winter temperatures have increased… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleOh, that is indeed worrisome, Melissa.
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You can really feel the words in this story touch your heart. Amazing job!
Thank you for your comment, Saim! I’m
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThis was such a beautiful story.Your words really touched a chord with me. Good work!
Thank you for your lovely comment, Dipayan. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
You’re welcome, Melissa.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleReally powerful story. This is the sort of story that could have an impact on people who don’t see the need to be proactive on climate change.
Thanks for your comment, Alan. It’s so hard to know where to start. But we all need to start somewhere.