
The Only Way They Know
Just after noon, on a hot August day, Hope sits on her favourite bench. There aren’t many green spaces in London anymore, but Regent’s Park is close enough for her to potter to a couple of times a week. Her repose is suddenly disturbed by a group of journalists following the British Prime Minister and American President as they take a turn about the park.
The sun hangs high, a burning disc in the cerulean sky. Suddenly, across the park, utter and complete silence falls. Then, one by one the insects begin to sing, each species adding a different buzzing tone to the entomological symphony; music is the only method they know that humans might understand.
The Prime Minister emits a bellow of laughter, exclaiming, “Isn’t it wonderful!”
The insects scroll through three songs, repeating them again and again. Hope gets the message immediately, and pushes herself up from the bench with a grunt of pain. She shuffles across to the gathered group. “Young man,” she shouts at the Prime Minister, poking him sharply in the ribs. “Are you not listening to the message in their choice of songs?” she asks. “We are stealing their homes. You need to wash out your ears!”
He looks at her blankly, but listens as instructed. Then he frowns and Hope notices a tear in the corner of his eye, which he quickly wipes away. Indeed, the insects are scrolling their way through three songs, trying to impart a message to the humans. The songs they hum and buzz are ‘Help’, ‘Killing Me Softly’ and ‘Earth Song’. The message, simply put; “Help, killing Earth.” Finally, he understands, and nods sadly, acknowledging to the insects that he has to make better choices to help the environment, and he needs to make them now.
The insects buzz a thankful acknowledgment that sounds a lot like applause, before resuming their normal humming, going about their business.
The Prime Minister gently embraces Hope before turning to the President. “I believe that the environment needs to be our top priority,” he said. “We have some difficult choices to make.”
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI had a problem with this competition, not with the subject matter, but with getting a story into the word count. This was originally the end of the story that I had planned, but when I started typing up (I rarely type up my stories in order), I found that I already had a word count of 659 words with about a fifth of my story. So I needed to have a… Read more »
Nice story, Carrie! I wonder if the insects are already trying to tell us something! We should listen more closely. Good work.
Thanks Fuji. The insects are losing so much of their natural habitat. Many people don’t generally notice, or care, when an insect species becomes extinct. Insects don’t have quite the same cute factor as a nice furry little mammal etc. But they are so important to our ecological system and are affected so badly by climate change. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWow. I enjoyed it so much, Carrie. Nicely done.
Thanks for commenting Lotchie. Glad you enjoyed it.
You’re welcome.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleSuch a different take on the prompt Carrie, well done! I was aware of the plight of the bees but, of course, there are so many other insects that climate change affects. A beautifully written story with a strong message.
Thanks Linda. I’m all about the insects. Someone has to stand up for bug rights! ?
Hi! I absolutely adore this story. “…music is the only method they know that humans might understand”. That line is gorgeous! Great work!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you so much Alexxandria for your kind comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it
This story brought me to so many emotions! I deeply care for the insects which is why I connected greatly with this story. I also love the sensory details in here! Made me feel like I was right there in London! I love your take on the theme! What a great story!
Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments Leyla. It’s always nice to find another insect advocate ?Glad you enjoyed it ?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleAs I was reading your story, I was thinking: “Finally someone who stands up for the bees and their rights! So important!“ And then I saw, in your comment to Linda, that it was exactly how you expressed it yourself! Concerning your comment about editing your story from a much higher number of words: I have been there several times, even going from 2,000 words to 350. It’s a challenge which feels… Read more »
Thanks for commenting Christer. Yes insects certainly play an important role in our eco system and bees, of course, are our major pollinators. Without them we wouldn’t have our plants anymore. I’ve been recording moths in our area for a few years now and the numbers of certain species have dropped hugely. Loss of meadowland, I’m sure, is the prime reason for their diminishing numbers. I must finish writing this story in… Read more »
Carrie, this is a beautiful story. I’m glad that the Prime Minister stopped and listened as instructed and didn’t just brush Hope’s comment away. It is not an easy task reducing the word count so much, but you have done it well. The message is still clear and your story is full of emotion. I enjoyed reading this.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for reading and commenting Marianna. I’m going to have to take the time to extend this because I need to get the message across from the rest of the animals who are at risk too, before it’s too late for some of them. ?
Carrie, it is a great idea to extend this. I think many more people need to read this.
Hello, Carrie. I am glad to re-read your story about bees and nature. The strong and beautiful message is still worthy to read. Great job, Carrie.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Lotchie. Someone needs to care about the littlest things 🙂