
The Saviour
This planet doesn’t support life but it might have done at some stage.
Remains found everywhere.
Made a promising discovery yesterday: a structure of two hundred and six pieces, composed mainly of calcium phosphate.
Gold, the fuel for our continued existence, is present in the form of a small chain around a part of the structure.
This finding might become our saviour if others such as this will be found in reasonable quantities.
Today, I have found a new object, buried in the sand. Tests I conducted revealed it as a primitive video-recording devise. I managed to decode the message a strange alien creature generated eons ago. Its aspect was repellent, the sounds it produced were a strident cacophony. I manged to get over that and the translator worked in the end.
I watched as the alien explained how its species evolved in time, extolled their inventions. They called that progress but they started wanting more and more. They fought wars for land, power, religion and politics. They became decadent and lost touch with their nurturing Gaia. They ignored the signs, the omens and when they finally realised what needed to be done it was too late. Their air was becoming unbreathable, their water all dried up.
The alien was the last of its kind, its testament was a warning to any intelligent, sentient being.
I am frightened as I feel a sense of affinity with that long dead alien. It could be me, this planet could be mine, this might become my species’ destiny too.
This is too close to home, a mirror for what is coming for us too. I know our time is short and we need to change, to stop violating our planet. How far can we travel across space and time to find more of what we have already destroyed through our greed? Will the High Council believe the story of this barren world, the words of this long extinct alien?
I beg you, Commander, don’t ignore this, don’t bury the truth, we still have choices…
Communication interrupted… can you hear me?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello! This was a very enjoyable read. As with my story, I find it interesting when we, as humans, write as other beings that find humans repellent. That, in itself, gives voice to just how much we are messing up our planet. Generalized we, of course. Anyway! My favorite part has got to be the description of the human skeleton as a “structure”, leading the reader to be able to form whatever… Read more »
LOL! Thank you so much! I read your story and loved it to bits as I found a kindred spirit. I just wonder if the powerful ones will listen to the alien’s concerns…
Wow, Greene. I really enjoyed reading this story, Greene. The idea and concept of the conversation of the aliens and humans between the past and the present were amazing. And then suddenly, the communication being cut off, which signaled the near end of the story, was very clean. You are great, Greene. Nice job.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you Lotchie! I was really hoping to convey what you just felt: the communication cutting could be by accident or done by someone who didn’t want to listen…
You’re welcome. I wish it could be by accident. I hope so.
Brilliant story, Greene. So many wonderful, thought-provoking images. Alas, most of the people reading your story will be those already doing their best to inspire change but always the possibility that a few of the ‘unconverted’ will recognise themselves, and the wider community, before that communication is interrupted and it will help to make a difference. Well done!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you Sandra. I felt the alien’s fear at what he/she/it found and the worry about the high powers not listening to the warning while I was writing the story…
The last sentence really struck home Greene. I couldn’t help thinking that communication was lost on purpose and, once again, history was repeating itself. Well written and very thought-provoking.
Thank you Linda. How many conferences, meetings, agreements and all seems to be for nothing. Yes communication is lost!
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