“Bogglings, arise!” roared Snagbert, “It’s time to come out of hiding and take action against those pesky humans.”

Slowly creatures pulled themselves from their peat hags. Some bore shiny green scales with thick mossy protrusions sprouting from their bodies. Most had dull and flaky scales, their mosses withered and wilting.

“They’ve drained our bogs,” continued Snagbert, “Stolen our peat. It’s killing our race. Look what happened to young Tarnok’s family!” He pulled a weeping boggbrat to his side. “Their home trampled by a herd of marauding deer—may they rest in peat. All because the humans drained our bogs to make grazing for their sheep.”

“I do like a nice bit of mutton though,” said Mudlarp, the matriarch of the clan.

“But not when it’s to the detriment of the peat hags,” said Snagbert. “The occasional sheep falling into the bog was all well and good, but an entire herd trampling our homes is too much to bear.”

“There ain’t no Sundew Fizz,” squeaked a boggbrat.

Snagbert nodded sagely. “Our peat is too dry to sustain the sundew plant, so there are no more fizzy treats for the boggbrats.”

“We don’t get no golden plover eggs no more either,” came a voice from the back of the crowd.

“The cotton grass is dying too,” said Mudlarp. “We’ll barely harvest enough cotton this year to weave new clothes for the clan and the reeds are too brittle to make furniture.”

“Our boggbrats’ health fails because the peat pollutes the air with carbon now instead of containing it. Our water is no longer filtered by the peat.” Snagbert paused. “We need balance. It takes years to replace just a thin layer of peat. At the rate things are going, we’ll be homeless. Our whole species could even die out.”

There were murmurs amongst the clan.

“The humans also suffer. Because the peat bogs have degraded so badly, their lowlands are flooding. The gases pollute their air too. For the sake of all life, we must act now.”

The bogglings screamed their approval. Waving tiny spears in the air, they cried, “To war!”

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Greene M Wills
Greene M Wills(@greene-m-wills)
1 month ago

Your variety of creatures is a delight, their dismay at the depleting of resources is real and so tangible that it made me tremble. The battle cry at the end felt right but would a war resolve the problem or create so many more?

Margarida Brei
Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
1 month ago

Carrie, I loved your picture which seemed like a moss and wart covered Baby Grogu.
Your first word made me scramble for the dictionary. Am I correct in assuming that you invented Bogglings?
Thanks for bringing awareness to peat land in such a telling and humorous story. You are encouraging me to read widely about peat.

Margarida Brei
Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
Reply to  Carrie OLeary
1 month ago

Just out of curiosity- where do you send your drabble?
You mean, you created the above picture of a boggling? So clever! I would love to know this process.

Margarida Brei
Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
Reply to  Carrie OLeary
1 month ago

If it is not too much trouble, Carrie, can you please write a list of websites where you send your stories. I could not locate Write Academy. Thank you.

Margarida Brei
Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
Reply to  Carrie OLeary
1 month ago

Thank you so much for your trouble, Carrie.
I will have to continue my search both for paid writing websites and no fee writing websites.
Cheers!

Julian
Julian(@julian)
1 month ago

Hi Carrie, i liked the shortened version of this story that you submitted to #wc so i was interested to see what you had done with an extra 250 words. I liked the additional dialogue and with it the references to the eco impact on plants and the knock-on effect for the Bogglings. Highly enjoyable

Linda Rock
Linda Rock(@linda-rock)
1 month ago

Congratulations Carrie, on inventing such wonderful characters as the Bogglings! I love your story that added a ‘human’ touch to a serious subject. Excellent!

Marianna Pieterse
Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
1 month ago

Carrie, reading this today has taught me something new. To be honest, I never paid much attention to pleatlands. I looked it up after reading this and realised how important it is to our survival. I loved your characters and can understand their frustration. This was a fantastic read.

Last edited 1 month ago by Marianna Pieterse
allinonefitness steven jenkins
allinonefitness steven jenkins(@allinonefitness-steven-jenkins)
1 month ago

Thanks for another great story, Carrie  😀 

Juma
Juma(@juma)
1 month ago

I enjoyed this story so much, Carrie, especially when I read your comments and the explanation of the importance of peat bogs. I’m not aware of peat bogs in the United States South, where I live. I’ve never seen one and don’t know what they look like. But after reading your story and all the comments, I’m very interested in learning more.

Thompson Emate
Thompson Emate(@thompson-emate)
1 month ago

I love this story, Carrie. It reminds me of George Orwell’s kind of writing. It’s a unique way of writing that needs a lot of creativity. I have never heard of peat bogs or peatlands. This story is an eye-opener. I love your AI-generated pictures. I’ll try my hands at one soon. Hope so. Well done, Carrie.

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
1 month ago

Carrie, thank you for a very fantastic read that you have imparted to us. I love it. I taught me a lot.

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
Reply to  Carrie OLeary
30 days ago

 💞 

Deborah Goulding
Deborah Goulding(@deborah-goulding)
1 month ago

Carrie, I so enjoyed this story. I can almost hear all their voices speaking to each other. They are in sync with their woes and their commitment to fix this major issue at hand. I wish them the best of luck!!

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