
Let There Be Peat
“Bogglings, arise!” roared Snagbert, “It’s time to come out of hiding and take action against those pesky humans.”
Slowly creatures pulled themselves from their peat hags. Some bore shiny green scales with thick mossy protrusions sprouting from their bodies. Most had dull and flaky scales, their mosses withered and wilting.
“They’ve drained our bogs,” continued Snagbert, “Stolen our peat. It’s killing our race. Look what happened to young Tarnok’s family!” He pulled a weeping boggbrat to his side. “Their home trampled by a herd of marauding deer—may they rest in peat. All because the humans drained our bogs to make grazing for their sheep.”
“I do like a nice bit of mutton though,” said Mudlarp, the matriarch of the clan.
“But not when it’s to the detriment of the peat hags,” said Snagbert. “The occasional sheep falling into the bog was all well and good, but an entire herd trampling our homes is too much to bear.”
“There ain’t no Sundew Fizz,” squeaked a boggbrat.
Snagbert nodded sagely. “Our peat is too dry to sustain the sundew plant, so there are no more fizzy treats for the boggbrats.”
“We don’t get no golden plover eggs no more either,” came a voice from the back of the crowd.
“The cotton grass is dying too,” said Mudlarp. “We’ll barely harvest enough cotton this year to weave new clothes for the clan and the reeds are too brittle to make furniture.”
“Our boggbrats’ health fails because the peat pollutes the air with carbon now instead of containing it. Our water is no longer filtered by the peat.” Snagbert paused. “We need balance. It takes years to replace just a thin layer of peat. At the rate things are going, we’ll be homeless. Our whole species could even die out.”
There were murmurs amongst the clan.
“The humans also suffer. Because the peat bogs have degraded so badly, their lowlands are flooding. The gases pollute their air too. For the sake of all life, we must act now.”
The bogglings screamed their approval. Waving tiny spears in the air, they cried, “To war!”
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Healthy peatland is an essential carbon sink and continued degradation of our peatlands will have a massive impact on climate change. For more information on the current state of our peatlands and the work that is going in to restoring them, there is some interesting and informative information here:
https://www.nature.scot/professional-advice/land-and-sea-management/carbon-management/restoring-scotlands-peatlands
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLQTpLdkWg9_KzWeA7j-i17Pgob-T5UnTH
Your variety of creatures is a delight, their dismay at the depleting of resources is real and so tangible that it made me tremble. The battle cry at the end felt right but would a war resolve the problem or create so many more?
Thanks for your comment, Greene. I think that most of the bogglings have never seen a human and the average adult male stands not much higher than an average human male’s ankle. When Snagbert brings them to that realisation, I think they may find negotiation to be a more realistic way forward.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCarrie, I loved your picture which seemed like a moss and wart covered Baby Grogu.
Your first word made me scramble for the dictionary. Am I correct in assuming that you invented Bogglings?
Thanks for bringing awareness to peat land in such a telling and humorous story. You are encouraging me to read widely about peat.
Thank you for your comment, Margarida. Yes, I invented the Bogglings, even down to creating the perfect AI images of them (I have several!). I’d seen a documentary that discussed peat degradation. A week or so later I had a 100 word story prompt for ‘scales’ and the bogglings came into being. I’m glad that the way I told the story has inspired you to explore the subject more 🙂
Just out of curiosity- where do you send your drabble?
You mean, you created the above picture of a boggling? So clever! I would love to know this process.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI did a course with Write Academy and they run a weekend challenge every week. The creation of the boggling was easy with an app called Wonder (there are a lot of other AI art programs too). You just have to type in the desired prompt and the program does all the work. Sometimes the results are a bit weird and you need to tweak the prompt, but it’s my ‘go to’… Read more »
If it is not too much trouble, Carrie, can you please write a list of websites where you send your stories. I could not locate Write Academy. Thank you.
This is where you can find Write Academy, but to access the site you will need to be doing one of their courses. The courses are modular and you do them in your own time and at your own pace: https://learn.writeacademy.com/ If you are interested, Wowcher are offering Write Academy’s ‘Write Storybooks For Children’ course for a very heavily discounted £11 at the moment. I did the course a couple of years… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThere’s this one too:
https://www.nycmidnight.com/100
I haven’t tried the 100-word/drabble competitions for this one and have only participated in the longer short story competitions for Globe Soup so I don’t know what they’re like. The Globe Soup community as a whole is very supportive, as is Write Academy.
Thank you so much for your trouble, Carrie.
I will have to continue my search both for paid writing websites and no fee writing websites.
Cheers!
No problem, hope you find something that’s useful for you 🙂
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Carrie, i liked the shortened version of this story that you submitted to #wc so i was interested to see what you had done with an extra 250 words. I liked the additional dialogue and with it the references to the eco impact on plants and the knock-on effect for the Bogglings. Highly enjoyable
Thanks, Julian. As Snagbert says towards the end, these issues affect us humans too. The degradation of the bogs also affects our invertebrates. How many of these species will be lost if the bogs aren’t restored to their former glory soon? I’d like to do more with this, perhaps use it as a children’s picture book to help our little ones understand the issues that are facing our planet.
Congratulations Carrie, on inventing such wonderful characters as the Bogglings! I love your story that added a ‘human’ touch to a serious subject. Excellent!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Linda. I’m so glad you like my bogglings. When I first started researching peat bog degradation, I wrote a story about a student doing a presentation and the story just felt dry and boring. I didn’t feel it would get the message across. When the idea of the bogglings came to me, I felt so inspired to write the story. The bogglings helped me tell a serious story in a… Read more »
Carrie, reading this today has taught me something new. To be honest, I never paid much attention to pleatlands. I looked it up after reading this and realised how important it is to our survival. I loved your characters and can understand their frustration. This was a fantastic read.
Thank you so much for your kind comment, Marianna. Before seeing a documentary recently I thought that the loss of peat bogs was detrimental to different species of animals. I hadn’t realised that they are carbon sinks and were so important to taking pollutants out of our air. It was a real eye-opener!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks for another great story, Carrie 😀
Thank you, Steven. Your support is very much appreciated 😊
I enjoyed this story so much, Carrie, especially when I read your comments and the explanation of the importance of peat bogs. I’m not aware of peat bogs in the United States South, where I live. I’ve never seen one and don’t know what they look like. But after reading your story and all the comments, I’m very interested in learning more.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleGlad you enjoyed the story, Juma. It was a learning experience for me too. If you follow the You Tube link in my pinned post there are plenty of videos of the peat bogs. The amount of wildlife they support is what draws me to them. Learning they are important as carbon sinks was a real eye-opener!
I love this story, Carrie. It reminds me of George Orwell’s kind of writing. It’s a unique way of writing that needs a lot of creativity. I have never heard of peat bogs or peatlands. This story is an eye-opener. I love your AI-generated pictures. I’ll try my hands at one soon. Hope so. Well done, Carrie.
Thank you, Thompson. I thought peat lands are specific to certain areas of the world which is why I thought I’d add some links about them in the pinned post. You should definitely have a go with the AI-generated pictures. It’s good fun to see the results you can get.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCarrie, thank you for a very fantastic read that you have imparted to us. I love it. I taught me a lot.
Thank you, Lotchie, I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. I learned a lot whilst writing it too!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCarrie, I so enjoyed this story. I can almost hear all their voices speaking to each other. They are in sync with their woes and their commitment to fix this major issue at hand. I wish them the best of luck!!
Thank you, Deborah, I’m glad you liked my bogglings. I wanted to get across that the degradation of peat bogs affected more than just us, and hoped that coming from the perspective of these little creatures who use the peat hags for their homes would make the subject a bit more interesting.