
The Fisherman and His Golden Blood
“Why are you a fisherman?”
I knew the whys didn’t matter. My future, it was being decided as I wasted breath. My future hinged on the forced blood sample that was taken from me just moments earlier.
I didn’t know what my blood type was, but I knew this: The chances of me possessing “golden blood” were highly improbable. There were only eleven worldwide, and that was before the plague ravaged this world.
Lysander, the newly appointed leader, just needed a donor. They only cared about this. They had to be desperate to even consider the taking of blood from a blue singlet like myself…
“I-I-I like being outdoors!”
This was, of course, just some filler. The truth was that I had been working on my boat; I wanted out of this eighty-sixed place. Perishing all alone meant freedom—it meant autonomy.
The drogher of Lysander and I talked only to pass the time until the results came in. My fate wasn’t promised, and it wasn’t dependent upon the conversation’s outcome.
“Look,” said the drogher, “cut the bulldust.” “Tell me about your family, what did your parents do?”
“My dad was a bricklayer, and my mother a baker.”
“A bricklayer…?”
I knew that would get a response. My blood would not be pedigree. I was without value to him.
“Yes—”
The drogher stared at me emotionless.
The lab technicians’ heavy gait could be heard hastily approaching from down the hall.
I went to the elevator.
The floor numbers in the color of yellow were speeding quickly by, undigested by my retina. They bled together—they became a blinding lump of confusion and panic.
Upon opening the door, I saw him, Lysander. He was white as a sheet.
“And his blood sir, was—”
“It didn’t go well…” The drogher looked puzzled.
I had imagined that a silvery mammoth boulder in the shape of an epilogue took refuge in my throat. I couldn’t rid myself of it.
“He has it…the golden blood, the fisherman,” Lysander muttered. “And he’ll be the key to saving us all.”
I’m now priceless.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleMelissa, this story is fabulous. It may be your best one yet. I was enthralled from the first two paragraphs and couldn’t wait to see what would happen next. I love that your simple fisherman, son of a bricklayer and a baker, is now priceless. The key to saving them all! Lovely.
Thank you for the comment, Fuji! Serves them right for making such assumptions based on a man’s job! I feel like this happens far too often, in our day-to-day lives. The simple fisherman, he can be the saviour as well!
A very interesting story Melissa. Is this part of a longer project? Just wondered, near the end, should that be ‘fisherman’ rather than ‘fishermen’?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleDefinitely should be “fisherman”. Thanks for catching that! And I was thinking about doing something more with it, this is all that’s been done with it so far.
We saw these comments and fixed the word In question. Thanks for finding that, Carrie! Great story, Melissa.
Thanks for the fix, you guys are the best! Thanks again, Carrie!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleNo problem. I don’t know how many times I read my own stuff and still miss typos, yet when I’m reading books or other people’s writing, I spot things all the time ?
Absolutely! I obsessively read over myself before hitting “submit”, that’s the embarrassing part??. You saved the day!
What a great story and a great picture, Melissa. Did you take the photo? By the way, congratulations for being the featured Voice on the Stars page. What an honor.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks for the comment, Juma. I take all the pictures that go with my stories. Sometimes it takes quite the imagination, but I always try! This schooner is called “Bluenose”, I am from the east coast of Canada, Nova Scotia to be exact. We are known as “Bluenosers”. The bluenose is on our dime—it happened to be the fastest fishing schooner in Canadian History! The original was built in 1921 , it… Read more »
Miss Melissa, you have written a very intriguing story. Now I have to reread to further my enjoyment and look up some of your complex words.
Thanks for your comment, Margarita?! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Everyday is a good day to learn something new, sorry that I made them complex!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello, Melissa. Your story is very inspiring to me. I see myself as the fisherman in your story. Very well portrayed and picture-perfect. Good job, Melissa.
Thank you, Lotchie. I’m happy you see yourself as the fisherman. I think we should all be a little more like him!
You’re welcome, Melissa.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleMelissa, I enjoyed your story very much! I like the idea of the simple fisherman being the one that is now priceless! The dialogue is very believable. Great story.
Hello, Marianna. Thanks so much for your comment! I’m glad you enjoyed the story. Fishermen, they can be heroes too. ?
I agree ?
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