
The Golden City
It was called the Golden City for two reasons. The first being, quite reasonably, the fact that it was the wealthiest city in the land, both in knowledge and coin. The second was rather less subtle.
The Palace was gold.
It wasn’t actually entirely gold, in the sense that it most assuredly was not made from the precious metal, but it was painted and decorated, dressed up with just enough real gold in the gilt veined white marble that it shone out like the giant, garish monstrosity it was. Golden archways, windows adorned with golden latticework, golden painted turrets. The Palace grounds themselves were encased in golden fencing, huge golden lions guarding glimmering gates of yet more gold.
It dripped from from every corner, oozing wealth and prosperity. The magnificent fountains at the entranceway looked as though they were spewing molten gold themselves, so was the reflection shimmering in the rippling water. As though you could run your fingers through it and claim it for your own, only to face the disappointment of watching clear water seep through your fingers. A trick, a con, so like everything else in this city. So like all the merchants and nobles who came here, desperately grasping for more.
It was a dazzling sight to see though, perched there in the middle of the city, especially on a bright summer day such as this. It gleamed and glowed, like a beacon alerting all to its presence, set on higher ground than the surrounding buildings, making it seem that much larger and more imposing. You could see it no matter where in the city you stood, reflecting light like a radiant aura.
It was grand. It was spectacular. It was utterly, and completely… awful.
It would blind you, this hideous display of wealth. Either from the glinting, golden rays of light reflecting from the Palace, leaving your eyes aching from the glow. Or the common misconception that you should always be grasping for that gold yourself. It pierced the mind, addled your wits, that chase for grandeur.
And Wil despised it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleGreat story, Emily. I’m usually not one to want to know more about a flash fiction story, being content to make up various back stories or continuations. But this one! You had me mesmerized with the descriptions of the hideous gold city, and for once, I want to know more. Is “Wil” by any chance the same Wilhelmine in your serpent story from a while back? I remembered her name, and noticed… Read more »
Thank you Fuji, I’m glad you enjoyed it! And you are quite right! It was in fact, my project for NaNoWriMo! (my first go at it!) Wilhelmine will have an entire adventure sometime in the future, and this was a snippet from it! I loved writing the first story with the sea serpent, and just got so attached to her and Grigg. Ever since I kept getting little niggles for more and… Read more »
Fantastic piece of writing, Emily, your descriptions of the city transport me there. Can’t wait to read the entire story when it’s finished. I loved Wil in your earlier story. Looking forward to finding out why she despises the city.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleShe’s such a fun character, I just love writing her! There are definitely a few reasons she’s not so fond of it ????
Wow Emily, my eyes ached from visualising all that glistening gold you so wonderfully describe. I’m actually with Wil on this one! That palace is indeed a monstrosity. You have set the story up so well and I look forward to learning more about Wil’s adventures within the Golden City.
Thank you Linda! And I quite agree, it’s definitely not to my tastes either ????
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello, Emily. Your story is so dazzling and intriguing. And your description of the golden city is amazing and stunned me. I look forward to knowing why Wil despises the golden city. Great story about the theme (color).
Thank you so much Lotchie! ????
You’re most welcome.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI don’t often admit it, but I love stories with satisfying last words. This is a clear picture of such stories. You’ve woven the Golden City deep into my mind. I could smell the city, even taste it. Then you did something I never expected: smashed that beauty with just one sentence. Truly magnificent!