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Eric Radcliffe
Eric Radcliffe (@eric-radcliffe)
10 months ago

I like this haiku Katy – always they question what the poet is thinking?

Susan Dawson
Susan Dawson (@susan-dawson)
10 months ago

Compelling, visual and thought provoking

Mary Kot
Mary Kot (@mary-kot)
8 months ago

Such a wonderful haiku! I love how you give a new meaning to the color red!

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Mary Kot
Mary Kot (@mary-kot)
5 months ago
Reply to  Katy Bizi

You’re welcome

Panos Bizi
Panos Bizi (@panos-bizi)
8 months ago

I don’t know much about the art of haiku but I love how simple and yet beautiful it is. Well done!

Crystal Cel.
Crystal Cel. (@crystal-cel)
7 months ago

Short, yet powerful. A perfect haiku! Good job, Katy.

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Mary Kot
Mary Kot (@mary-kot)
7 months ago

After coming back and re-reading this haiku, I comprehend it in a totally different way. The first time it was all about death and the red color of blood, while, now, it reminded me of love and its world widely-known and distinctive red color.

Mary Kot
Mary Kot (@mary-kot)
5 months ago
Reply to  Katy Bizi

I agree; this is why a haiku is so powerful in such few words.

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Julie Harris
Julie Harris (@julie-harris)
5 months ago

Powerful picture for a dark and haunting haiku. You have a very original mind.

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