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Practice Makes Perfect

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Eric Radcliffe
Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
2 years ago

How simply brilliantly expressed!

Genya Johnson
Genya Johnson(@genya-johnson)
2 years ago

Beautifully written.

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Sandra James
Sandra James(@sandra-james)
1 year ago

Lovely, Culture Dragon! I haven’t written a lot of Haiku but reading yours has inspired me to try some more. Thank you!

Eric Radcliffe
Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
1 year ago

I am wondering where you are Culture Dragon? You are missed here at the Voice club. I hope all is well with you.

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Katy Bizi
Katy Bizi(@katy-bizi)
Reply to  Culture Dragon
1 year ago

As Eric has said, you’ve been missed, Culture Dragon and we certainly can’t wait to read more pieces of yours!

Katy Bizi
Katy Bizi(@katy-bizi)
Reply to  Culture Dragon
1 year ago

And thank you for teaching us something new. I do not know much, mostly nothing actually, about Chinese idioms, but this is a nice start.

Eric Radcliffe
Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
Reply to  Culture Dragon
1 year ago

Hello my Friend, my mind is swirling to ease your problem/s, and in regard to your writer block. I remembered the saying – ”keep it simple”. This is the way that I see it (understand) You understand the principle of Chi, it flows, it can not be forced. I thought, when I was about to write, all the ideas would be there before I put pen to paper, that everything I needed would be ready at hand. So I waited, and waited, no story, no ideas. It was then that I realized that while I was thinking nothing was getting done, so what was the simplest thing to do? Just write! Write from the heart, write what I felt, and an amazing thing happened Culture Dragon, the voice that keeps interfering is silenced, different thoughts emerge, ideas too, thing begin to flow, you are at the core of your self. Life is simple. I smile to myself when I remember this….This world is an amazing place…….it is only people who complicate it! Just write how you feel, what you feel, how you see life around you, just write, does it have to make sense, no, so long as it makes… Read more »

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Eric Radcliffe
Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
Reply to  Culture Dragon
1 year ago

Hello my Friend, it’s good to have you back again. Remember that this site is not just about writing, there is an abundance of wealth here on many topics too, so your proverbial pockets will never feel empty. Enjoy your writing and all the comments that come your way.

Katy Bizi
Katy Bizi(@katy-bizi)
1 year ago

Another beautifully written haiku! Of course, you wouldn’t expect anything less from Culture Dragon.

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