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Juma
Juma (@juma)
5 months ago

This is lovely, Andrew. I am very intrigued by the “blooming in stages”, with its multiple meanings. Can you tell us more?

Juma
Juma (@juma)
5 months ago
Reply to  Andrew Carter

Thanks so much for your deeper discussion, Andrew! When I first read your “blooming in stages” phrase, I thought of a person’s development also occurring in stages – body, mind and spirit. How exciting it is to always be growing and blooming, like your Indian Guava! If you uploaded to Unsplash, the picture must be from your own garden? Forgive my ignorance, but does New South Wales have a tropical climate? You must have an incredible garden. I agree with you about the great gift that Avatar Culture Dragon is giving to all of us. Your haiku comes alive as he writes it, letter by letter. Thanks to both of you for a unique experience.

Katy Bizi
Katy Bizi (@katy-bizi)
4 months ago
Reply to  Andrew Carter

This is so interesting. It’s so nice to find out what exactly are the writer’s thoughts and inspirations behind a haiku. Thank you for sharing!

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