I Am Water

Another nice poem from member Eric Radcliffe

I am silent, gentle in flowing, caressing, soothing, calming.
I am hard as rock, wild and crashing, reckless in dashing, splashing, cascading

I am the rainbow, the snowflake, ever changing, inspiring, ever free
I am the storm, the spring shower 

I am the messenger in christening, the force in nature that helps her grow,  
the source of life.

I am the seas the oceans – I swoon to the moon as I ebb and flow

I am the calmness in the veil of the mist
I change storm clouds from black to grey to white, to blue, moving from imperfect to perfect

I am rain- hail- icicles- puddles- streams – seas and rivers, waterfalls too
I am the performer
I am the miracle of life.

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Fuji
Fuji(@fuji)
2 years ago

A lovely, life-affirming poem. My favorite line is “I am the calmness in the veil of the mist”. That special line seems to capture the mystery and dual nature of water. I like this poem very much!

Sandra James
Sandra James(@sandra-james)
2 years ago

Beautiful poem, Eric. Something to pause and reflect on instead of all the sad news around us at the moment. Thank you. It left me with a smile and a lovely positive feeling.

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musing mind
musing mind(@musing-mind)
2 years ago

Very lovely poem! It is very calming to read.

Culture Dragon
Culture Dragon(@culture-dragon)
2 years ago

Hi Eric – I just listened to your poetry read by Voice club member Pragya Rathore, and I must say she did a great job recording. Her voice really accentuates your wonderful poem above, breathing even more life into this poem. Great work from both of you – keep writing and recording!

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Pragya Rathore
Pragya Rathore(@pragya-rathore)
Reply to  Culture Dragon
2 years ago

It means a lot to me to hear you say that, Culture Dragon 🙂 Thanks a ton!

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Pragya Rathore
Pragya Rathore(@pragya-rathore)
Reply to  Eric Radcliffe
2 years ago

It was a privilege to read your words, both for the mind and the soul. The way your words flow throughout the poem- well, I cannot help but compare it to the flawless motion of water. You did a great job with the onomatopoeia in the poem and the words roll right off the tongue, making it a pleasure to read aloud.

Carrie OLeary
Carrie OLeary(@carrie-oleary)
Reply to  Pragya Rathore
2 years ago

I very much enjoyed your reading of the this beautiful poem Pragya. You brought Eric’s words to life.

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Pragya Rathore
Pragya Rathore(@pragya-rathore)
Reply to  Carrie OLeary
2 years ago

That makes me immeasurably delighted Carrie 🙂

Nimra Savanghan
Nimra Savanghan(@nimra-savanghan)
2 years ago

Beautiful Poem!

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Genya Johnson
Genya Johnson(@genya-johnson)
2 years ago

Water gives us life. You have given water a new life, a new meaning. I absolutely loved this. The words flowed just like water does.

Carrie OLeary
Carrie OLeary(@carrie-oleary)
2 years ago

Beautiful poem Eric. I particularly like the line ‘I swoon to the moon as I ebb and flow’

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Emily O'Leary
Emily O'Leary(@emily-oleary)
2 years ago

This is a beautiful poem, Eric. Love the way it flows!

Carrie OLeary
Carrie OLeary(@carrie-oleary)
Reply to  Emily O'Leary
2 years ago

Just like water 😉

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Christer Norrlof
Christer Norrlof(@christer-norrlof)
2 years ago

Congratulations to a very well written poem, Eric. At the same time as it goes very deep, it gives a broad description of all the miraculous things water is and can do for us. The poem contains both mystery and everyday life.

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
1 year ago

Great poem, Eric! Congratulations

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Greene M Wills
Greene M Wills(@greene-m-wills)
1 year ago

I enjoyed your poem so much! It reminded me of a frosty dawn in Iceland, the night after watching the Northern Lights. The feeling of something clean and crisp was almost palpable…

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