From Darkness She Will Rise
I’d always been at odds with my friend Sophie’s fascination for the macabre. While I enjoyed a light-hearted romcom, her tastes favoured the dark side. And whereas I obsessed over the latest teenage heartthrob, she swooned over Dracula.
It was her idea to take the shortcut to college, through the graveyard, that day we first encountered Mary. The weather-beaten marble headstone, engraved with roses and fang-like thorns, drew Sophie like a magnet. But what intrigued us both was Mary’s age, the same as ours, and the inscription that read ‘From darkness she will rise’.
With Halloween approaching, it was no surprise Sophie was desperate we participate. But the thought of swapping my ‘too cool for school’ image, for a night of ‘trick and treating’, had me cringing. And I’d never have agreed if it hadn’t been for charity.
Over the following weeks, we mastered basic magic tricks that we planned to perform in return for a donation. And that was when Sophie threw a curve ball. Vampires! We’d entertain our public in the bloodcurdling form of …Vampires! It was guaranteed, she convinced me, to increase our earning potential.
Wrapped in a black velvet cloak, crimson red lipstick dominating my chalk-white complexion, I ventured into the night.
The graveyard, eerily bathed in the evening mist, sent shivers through me. I’d arrived early, so was relieved that Sophie was already waiting beside Mary’s grave. Her lips, tinged with blue, curved in a welcoming smile as I approached.
She was unrecognisable. Her skin, so pale it was virtually translucent. Her bloodshot eyes, almost demonic. I’d guessed she would outshine me, but this was impressive.
Our tricks were well rewarded. None more so than Sophie’s ‘teeth to fangs’ transformation, that drew gasps, even from me. I’d never seen it before.
Back at the graveyard, our goodbyes said, I turned to leave. Suddenly, I felt a sharp pain in my neck, rendering me helpless, euphoric and consumed with exquisite pleasure.
Sophie never forgave me for not showing up that night. But she’s somewhat compensated that, since then, I prefer horror movies and drool over Dracula.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWe loved the literal transformation of the narrator in this story. We also have a special fondness for stories that leave us a bit mystified, and this one does just that. Was it Sophie or Mary in the graveyard that night? Are they one and the same? Why did Sophie think her friend didn’t show up? The questions are delicious, like the story. Oh yes, and we loved the title.

I’m so glad you saw what I saw in my story. And I’m over the moon to be chosen as runner up. I changed the title at the last minute as the first was hyphenated and the software wouldn’t accept it. So fate took a hand in that!
Very atmospheric and creepy Linda. Enjoyed reading it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks Carrie
Very clever and imaginative. You certainly drew me straight into the story.
Thanks Genya
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Linda, I enjoyed reading the story.
Thank you Inderjeet, so glad you liked it.
That took some thinking about at the end, but I think I have worked it out now. Well done.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks Susan. Actually I had 2 trains of thought with the ending. (1) Did she spend the evening with Mary, a vampire, hence the bite or (2) Is Sophie really Mary but doesn’t want her friend to know but couldn’t resist biting her? Both work for me!
I did wonder when I got to the line, “She was unrecognisable”…!
Really enjoyed this Linda!
Thanks Emily. Always good when I can get readers wondering…
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleNicely written Linda, you got right into the story from the beginning. I like the bit(e) at the end!
Ha ha. I think my main character enjoyed the bite too Eric! Thanks for reading and commenting.
Congratulations Linda. I’m so pleased for you 🙂
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks so much Carrie. That was totally unexpected given the exceptional shortlisted stories, I’m still in a bit of a daze! Delighted for Emily, a well deserved win.
Congratulations Linda, it was a well written story and I’m glad one of the write academy got picked.
Thanks so much Inderjeet. I think we all did really well to get shortlisted,
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleBig congratulations Linda! Very pleased for you ?
Thanks so much Emily. It’s just sinking in! Huge congrats to you too, brilliant achievement.
Congratulations on runner up, Linda. What is the write academy?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks very much Susan. Write Academy provides on-line courses for writing for children, young adults and adults. There is also a ‘Plus’ membership which provides expert feedback on a weekly writing prompt competition.
Congratulations Linda and Well Done, I loved your story. – Eric.
Thanks so much Eric. I’m really glad you liked it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello Linda and congratulations! I love that your story is from a teenager’s perspective, and that it plays out in a graveyard. Very sinister, very spooky, and very mysterious! I still don’t know who was who – so I play it out in my head sometimes to consider different explanations. Wait a minute … is there a clue in the title itself? “From Darkness She Will Rise”. I hadn’t figured that in… Read more »
Congratulations to the success with your story, Linda. You deserve it! Yours story is very well written.
Thank you so much Christer, your comment means a lot. There were so many amazing shortlisted stories. I was extremely proud and humbled to be chosen as a runner up.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations,miss Linda, for your wonderful story. It creates so many questions whose answers are up to the readers to find out.
Thank you so much Katy and apologies for not replying sooner. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story and comment.
What a delight to hear you read your story as an audio presentation, Linda! I enjoyed “From Darkness She Will Rise” when I first read it at Halloween, and now it is even more enjoyable in your own unique voice. I hope you will record often – you seem to have the perfect voice for it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHow nice of you to say that Fuji and I’m so glad you enjoyed my story. I was a little apprehensive of recording my voice at first but I have to say that I really enjoyed it.