
Truly Scary Halloween
Yellow, orange, and red maple leaves vied for attention on our front yard tree. Our neighbour’s ginkgo seemed to transform itself from green to a uniform yellow overnight. Pumpkins and other gourds adorned walkways, stairs, and porches. Some were carved into jack-o’-lanterns while others remained pristine. Skeletons hanging from tree limbs swayed in the autumn breeze, while black cats with evil-looking yellow eyes peered from behind bushes encrusted with plastic spider webs. Seasonal banners hanging from porch roofs completed the picture of a suburban neighbourhood ready for trick or treaters.
At our house, I’d installed a candy chute, a piece of plastic downspout I attached to our front stair railing. When the hordes descended on us, we could stand on our porch and launch the sugary treats down the spout into baskets and bags. It would provide the mandatory social distancing and entertain the masked marauders.
As afternoon became evening, Mother Nature stepped up. Fog swirled around houses and trees, stirring the multicoloured leaves littering the ground. The city lights, augmented by a harvest moon rising above the eastern horizon, gave the fog an eerie orange glow.
The ambience was perfect. But we heard no screeching of childish voices and saw no black-hatted witches or fairy princesses waving their magic wands. Where were the sidewalk clogging goblins and ghosts with their pillowcases or pumpkin-shaped plastic baskets?
COVID-19’s second wave had descended upon us. The Celtic celebration of Samhain, or as we call it, Halloween, wasn’t to be. Civic governments discouraged celebration of the ancient harvest festival, and parents wouldn’t send their youngsters door to door demanding treats.
This latest salvo in the pandemic story was truly scary. When, if ever, would life return to normal?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleGreat story as usual. Very relevant to the current situation.
Thanks for the positive comment. I really enjoy writing little stories for the Voice.club website. I think I might be overly focused on the pandemic, two stories in a row with a Covid theme. Better change that up for the next one.
I love your descriptions Alan, your writing is so visual that you can really picture the scene that you’ve set. Such a shame that all that work has to go to waste.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you. Your comment ‘I love your descriptions’ really made my day. I don’t usually spend much time on descriptions, offering only the barest details and letting the reader fill in the blanks. This story was very simple, gave me lots of space to get out of my comfort zone and focus on description. Glad to hear that at least one person appreciated it. Still two days before Halloween and the local… Read more »
Such a colourful visual story Alan, I could picture the scene so vividly. I struggle with descriptions so kudos to you! I really enjoyed your story but how sad that what should have been an evening of fun was ruined by this terrible virus.
Thanks for the positive comments from another challenged by writing descriptive passages. I should see in about eight hours if the real world situation hereabouts is as depressing as the one I imagined in my story. So far, it’s a nice sunny day but very close to freezing.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA different take on Halloween stories, Alan, and a great one! I like the way you built up the expectations and then let them come tumbling down with the scary discovery that no witches or screaming children are in sight. You have a great way of handling the language. I loved the expression “the masked marauders”!
Thanks for the positive comments. Others can do the creepy stuff far better than I can, so I had to go for a different slant on the theme. I like my masked marauders, it reinforced the COVID theme.
Hi Alan, here we are still handcuffed by this Virus, still under lock down, and your story is even more relevant. When you said others can do the ”Creepy Stuff” please don’t let that take away the fact that there are other ways and means in how we express it in our writing. I thought your story expressed the horror of the Virus to a ”T”. Well written.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHere in Nova Scotia we aren’t subject to another lock down. We’re more like sheep wandering the hillsides with geriatric, almost toothless sheepdogs trying to keep us from misbehaving. When the organizers of this site suggested the scary theme, I’m sure they were thinking of typical Halloween-like ideas of scary. I’ve been focused on COVID and how it affects all our lives and couldn’t resist a story about the scary aspects of… Read more »
This story is so relevant to the current pandemic. You bring a different kind of Halloween and gave us a clue on how to celebrate it while complying with the rules of social distancing and wearing masks.
I have no idea how it works in your part of the world, but here in our little corner, the roll-out of vaccines sputters and a third wave threatens. Our reliance on social distancing and inventive ways to accomplish that (like my Halloween candy chute) will be with us for a while.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYes, same here Alan. There’s a different kind of vaccine rolling out, but they are following some priority list on who gets vaccinated first, that’s why still the cases are rising in number and some places are lockdown again for the third time. We are relying only on social distancing, Faceshield, facemask, and proper handwashing.
What a wonderfully detailed story, Alan! Congratulations!
Thanks for the positive comment. My fiction is usually fiction, but this one was pretty much a true story about last fall’s Halloween in the midst of the COVID-19 pandemic. The comments of the kids were real. I listened for them with this story in mind.
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