
Crazy Daisy
I knew my teacher hated me; my suspicions confirmed when she assigned me to Crazy Daisy for our social studies project.
We were to help older people in the community with gardening and odd jobs. Daisy lived at the end of my street in a cottage with an extensive garden; once beautiful but now overgrown and eerie. Most people thought she was a witch.
When I arrived for my first visit, Crazy Daisy opened the door looking as apprehensive as I felt. She suggested coffee and when she went to the kitchen I inspected the lounge room. Old style sofa, matching chairs, lamp and a sideboard piled high with sweets and chocolates.
Daisy returned and found me inspecting them.
“You eat lots of chocolate,” I said, taking the coffee.
“No,” she replied. “I always get them for Halloween, but no one ever comes.”
Tears welled in her eyes before she turned away.
My cheeks burned. We’d always avoided her house at Halloween, but every year she’d been waiting and hoping…
Over coffee, Daisy told me her husband, Bobby, didn’t come home from World War II. Her dreams of a family stolen by a sniper’s bullet. She couldn’t love anyone else after Bobby but always hoped neighbourhood children would come on Halloween.
“I’m sure they will this year,” I told her, and this time her eyes shone with joy.
Only three days until Halloween. I came back the next day, and the next. My dad joined me, pruning, weeding and mowing until the garden ceased to be a jungle. I trimmed the rose bush at the front gate; Daisy said Bobby planted it before he left but it had never flowered.
On Halloween night I declined to Trick or Treat with my friends. Instead I helped Daisy put a table loaded with treats on the verandah and in the centre a huge pumpkin we carved together.
Children came, my friends came, and as we stood together on the steps a glowing Daisy gasped and pointed to the gate.
At the top of Bobby’s rose bush, one tiny bud bloomed.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThis story is different, featuring the “scary” as perceived by others. The reveal is the beauty inside the “witch” that’s made visible through the help of the main character. A Halloween tale that stands out for its sweetness!

Thank you very much Voice-Team! I really appreciate the feedback and I’m honoured to have been chosen as a finalist in the company of some really wonderful stories. Thank you for running this inspiring competition and I’m really looking forward to the next one 🙂
Sandra this is lovely. Such a beautiful theme. Friendship and fun without the gore. My type of Halloween.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks Mary! My kind of Halloween, too. An act of kindness that will linger long afterwards, understanding and still lots of fun. I did enjoy writing it 🙂
This is lovely Sandra. Acts of kindness should be present for every Holiday.
Thank you Emily, I completely agree. What better feeling can there be? A win for everyone! How lucky we are to be writers and perhaps be able to subtly encourage readers to look for kindness opportunities! So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting 🙂
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA story that takes the reader completely by surprise Sandra. Yes it’s still a Halloween story, but with a lovely human touch. It’s unexpected, but that’s what makes a good story a great one. I love this, and will read it to my granddaughters.
Thank you, Eric! I feel very honoured knowing you are going to read it to your granddaughters. I hope they enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I really felt like I was there in the garden as I wrote and could almost smell the rosebud when it bloomed. How good it is to be able to ‘live’ another life, for just a little while 🙂
I’ve come back? I forgot to say what a misleading title.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks again, Eric. I find that sometimes titles come to me easily, other times it seems to take a while before I get one I’m happy with.
A really nice Halloween Story, I enjoyed reading the story.
Thank you very much, Inderjeet! I do appreciate the feedback and am glad you liked my story 🙂
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleLovely story, Sandra, and told with such empathy. It was a real joy to read and leaves you with the feeling that there is still a little bit of love in the world.
Thank you, Carrie, so glad you enjoyed it. And, yes, we certainly need that little bit of love in the world right now. An act of kindness can go a very long way 🙂
Heartwarming. It was very low key for the children round here, but some people put out displays by the gate and some of them were trashed by passing youths.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWhat a sweet and comforting story, Sandra! I love stories that show that preconceived, negative opinions can be turned around so that people can see each other in a new light. The flowering rose is a good metaphor for the miraculous change.