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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Fuji, did you feel yourself writing this at full pace, trying to keep up with the flow of ideas? I read it at the speed dictated by you, the writer. That’s something I became aware of when reading, and then the accident to the little girl slows everything down. Is there a moral here in this story? Maybe! Fuji I liked the ending, it leaves me thinking what if?
Ironically, the key to this story is Claude and his slogan “Slow Down and Live”. Sounds like maybe you were pulled in by Maila and her “Full Speed Ahead” ideas. She’s the real loser in this story, with her life of fear and anger, her headaches, her inability to arrive anywhere on time. This story should be read slowly, like all stories – so that the underlying meanings and backstories can be… Read more »
A very strong storyline made more stirring by the lapse into history and back again.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with Google“Start in the middle”, was a line of advice I recently read about writing successful Flash Fiction. The suggestion was to start in the middle, then fill in any necessary back story, then return to the end. Seems like that advice worked pretty well in this story! Thanks for commenting on that concept, Susan.
Your story really reflects on the world today, so many people rushing around at full speed fighting to be at the top of their game. What they don’t realise is that they are completely missing the beauty of the world around them; light sparkling through water droplets as the starling takes a bath in a puddle, patterns left on the sand by the retreating tide, tiny, jewelled insects, the trilling of a… Read more »
Carrie, I absolutely love your comment. You have enhanced my story a hundred fold with your poetic and impassioned encouragement. May we all stop and smell the roses! Thank you, thank you, thank you.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI live in a beautiful rural area but sometimes need to travel through our state capital, Melbourne. I am sure I’ve seen Maila in a neighbouring car, in fact I’m sure she can be found on most busy roads 🙁 If only she, and her clones, could read your story, reflect and begin to see a bigger (and better) picture. Great message and very well written 🙂
Hi Sandra – Seems that one silver lining in the Covid cloud is that fewer people are on the road these days and fewer people are in a hurry. Maybe everyone can remember these lessons when we’re able to move around freely again! Thanks so much for your feedback!
Hello, Fuji. I really like the motto: “ Slow down and live ”. Sometimes we have to slow down so we don’t stumble and get hurt in a hurry. Because sometimes in our haste we don’t have time to look around. And we miss looking at the little things that give us true happiness like the beauty of nature, etc. I agree with everything Carrie said.
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