Inspirare
There once were two brothers living and toiling the fields together. One night Spirit came to their house and breathed Creative Genius into the younger brother’s nostrils.
And a powerful longing took root within that brother. He became quiet and absentminded and was no longer satisfied with walking behind their oxen, eating potatoes and sleeping.
His brother saw it and tried to gladden him. He made ugly faces, belched and farted, and beat him with a little stick. The younger brother did not smile.
But one day, he started to draw figures on a wall. He depicted men, animals and nature. And later on, he made songs that he sang and stories that he told his brother.
Joy had now returned to him and was vibrating deep inside him.
But the older brother resented it, because he had to do the barley harvest alone. And he said unto his brother: “Your drawings and music and stories are useless. They give us neither seed nor meat.”
And sadness now came over the younger brother because he felt that his brother was right. But he knew that eating, working and sleeping was not enough for him.
And he went to sit in the mud with the pigs and cried, “I wish I were like my brother. I deserve not to eat.”
But then Spirit appeared, and he gently whispered, “With the ability I gave you, you can stir the softer parts within your brother’s soul and wake up his awareness that I am within him. This will bring you closer to each other and closer to me. This is your mission.”
And the younger brother went to his brother and said, “Let me make my pictures and my music and my stories. I will entertain you when your tiredness is heavy and soothe you when sadness bothers you.”
And behold, the older brother now saw a light in his brother’s eyes! And it filled him with love and he said, “Work with me when possible. Do your own things when necessary.”
And his enmity was gone, and they continued in peace together.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleAn outstanding story, in the midst of an entire collection of outstanding stories. Somehow you captured the feel of prehistoric times while still speaking to those of us who try to be artists today. Superb writing!

Dear Voice-Team, Did you hear the scream this afternoon that came from Colombia? It was a scream that contained 50% surprise and 50% happiness. Since it was a totally spontaneous one, it came out in Swedish, which caused a bit of a language problem in the house. The way my Colombian wife interpreted it, she was sure I had been bit by a snake, so she came running as fast as she… Read more »
Christer, you are priceless! Your comment was its own story, exciting and moving and inspiring not to mention fun. You are indeed a born story teller!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks Juma, I’m glad you saw my “little” comment with the thank you note. Afterwards, I realized that I should have slimmed it down, since it contained more than 350 words. And still, I didn’t write that I very much need Voice.club, you and the other guys to share this activity with, since the Latinos only read the Bible and Facebook. Sadly, I have nobody around here to share good, written stories… Read more »
I couldn’t agree more with you, Juma! Christer’s comment could be published as a story (though not a short story) itself. Nicely said, Christer!
Re-reading my comment now reminds me that it came out very honestly and spontaneously. It’s an amazing feeling when thoughts and words show up in your mind in that way. It’s like a free ride in an amusement park for a little kid. Is that what they call inspiration? Thank you very much, Katy, for your nice comment.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYour story made me think about a world still young and many possibilities open to humanity for growth and development. Really like it!
It makes me happy to see that you liked the story, Greene. Yes, it’s a simple story from a time which seemed innocent and simple. But, just like today, compromises, love and mutual respect and understanding were important.
A very interesting story Christer with a mythological feel to it. I could imagine stone age man sitting round the fireside telling this tale. Good job.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleSince this contrast in personalities has always existed, I tried to make the story sound timeless. At first, I had the language more Bible-like, but since English isn’t my first language, I didn’t feel totally certain about some old forms. Therefore, I let it stay with this simplicity in language and story. Thanks for you kind comment, Carrie.
Two brothers on different paths but coming together through understanding. I’ve read your story several times Christer and found it very comforting. Very well written.
I’m glad you liked the story, Linda, and that you found it comforting. Yes, the brothers are each other’s opposites, but at the same time, both need to eat and both have the spirit present inside in some way. In this case, their respect and love for each other made them come to a good agreement.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleChrister, I absolutely love this story. For so many of us, the urge to create is strong and impossible to ignore. Yet the world often tells us, about our creations, “They give us neither seed nor meat.” Thank heavens for places like Voice.club and people like the writers here who all share a passion for the written word, and for celebrating our humanity. There’s seed and meat enough for all in this… Read more »
It makes me very happy to see that you loved the story, Juma. I also love the way you put it about the urge to write and the gratitude for Voice.club, where we can express and share our passion. Yes, this is our “seed and meat”, as well as the more physical ones. Let’s continue to celebrate!
Christer, where did I first hear this? – That everyone has a gift! Some understand this from an early age, and like myself much later on in life – (through encouragement). But the spirit is in us all, it is just that we don’t listen. Could the other brother who doubts, be the voice in us all? A great write Christer – Thank You.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWe have something in common there, Eric. I have always enjoyed reading, singing and looking at art, But, like you, only at this old (mature) age have I started to write. I think everybody has both these two brothers within. As you say, the creative spirit is always there in some way. And we, who like to write, often have that skeptical inner voice, mixed with the other one, whispering about the… Read more »
Oh dear. Boys don’t change, do they. What a way to cheer someone up. I’m now wondering where you got the idea from (wink). Very suitable picture.
Haha, I think I might have encountered one or two of those men/boys who try to cheer people up that way. Since the setting of the story is very simplistic, I thought it could fit in.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHonestly, I love it. It is so fascinating. The setting and the images are so nice, I can sense it as a mythological tale in a stone age era but very enjoyable and inspiring. Well-written.
Thank you, Lotchie. Yes, I wanted to make the story sound as an eternal contrast which existed far back in history and still exists. I think that most of us, who like to create, feel the split within as well. And sometimes from the surrounding.
This is such a great story Christer, one of my favorites. Both ancient and modern, it outlines the eternal dilemma of the artist, and the redemption of the creator and society, through great art. It was a watershed moment here in America to have a young poet dazzle us with words back in January. We were sorely in need of inspiration then – and now. Thank you for your gift.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYour generous and insightful comments mean a lot, Fuji. Thank you! Isn’t it interesting to see how humanity is divided between those whose hearts are touched by an artistic expression and those who only see one or two dimensions of it? Like you, and certainly millions of others, I was deeply touched by Amanda Gorman’s poem, and yet, it’s “only” common words, written by a young girl on a piece of paper.… Read more »
Well done, Christer! If only two ‘sides’ could always come together like this, compromising and seeing each other’s point of view. I enjoyed it very much, especially the sentence ‘ Work with me when possible. Do your own things when necessary.’
Thank you, Sandra. Yes, both sides exist, even within each one of us, creating tensions which might be necessary for progress and creation, although simultaneously setting up for conflicts and unhappiness.
It makes me happy to see that you noticed and liked the quoted sentence. It holds the kind of thinking that can lead to peace, respect and acceptance.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleChrister, your story is a great reminder that no two people are alike and that there is a place for everyone in this world. If we all were the same, how boring life would be! I like the use of Bible-language as it adds to the feel of this happening a long time ago. So does the mention of the drawing of the figures. I think art in its various forms reminds… Read more »
Thanks for your comment, Marianna! I agree that life is more interesting with diversity, even if this means difficulties and conflicts. And there is always the possibility of reconciliation.
Christer, I couldn’t agree more!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleInteresting description of a simpler time in a simpler world when two brothers with a little spiritual help can come to an understanding and learn to appreciate each others perspectives and work together. Add a few more people, or a few dozen or a few thousand and such simple solutions are no longer possible. We’re supposed to be so much smarter now, but we can’t manage to live together in peace. Thought… Read more »
I’m glad you appreciated the story, Alan. Of course, as you say, with more participants, the game gets more entangled and complex. To solve problems with disagreements, smartness is not enough. It takes a willingness to compromise, which always starts with the individual. Gandhi said: “You have to be the change you want to see.”
“Pictures and my music and (…)stories (…)” give a light in everybody’s eyes. Yes, Christer. My LIKE to your story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for your LIKE, Santana. Good luck with your creative activities.
Thank you Christer. I can’t imagine a life without creativity and imagination. And without the pure art hiding in a melody, or in a picture of the sun early morning. And then come the stories, recording forever on simple white paper all the feelings that art can give.
And you are blessed to have that gift, that talent, that longing. A friendly spirit sneaked up on you and breathed it into your nostrils one night while you were sleeping.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou are too good Christer! And a very good writer. Congrats for your story! You cut the line!!
Thank you very much, Santana. I feel totally humbled and honored.
I really like your style. We all have our own path and mission, but we need support and love, to achieve something good. The boys were different, but they had a strong bond. Great job! ?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYes, Birgitta (the Swedish version of your name)! We are all different, but if we can find a common ground, everything turns smoother and easier. And on a deep level, we are all bonded to each other. I’m glad you liked the old fashioned style. Thanks for taking time to respond!
Congratulations on your win Christer.
Thank you very much, Carrie.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations Christer! A well deserved win, really pleased for you.
I feel totally overwhelmed. When I read all the stories, I thought that there were so many good ones that it was an honor even to be on the shortlist.
Congratulations, Christer! This story truly deserved to win. I am so happy for you.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you very much, Fuji. To be honest, I am always very impressed by your stories. All of them are very well worked through in all their details in a totally professional way.
Congratulations Christer! This was a great story and a well-deserved win.
Thanks a lot, Marianna. Indeed, I feel so grateful for this success.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHow proud you must be Christer! Let me please add my ‘Congratulations’ with all those above to make One Voice – well done!
You are so right, Eric. I do feel very proud and honored. And also encouraged to continue writing! Not least because there are so many good writers in this community. Another thought that comes to mind is that after these last few months with Voice.club, it feels like many of us have become personal friends. The same names appear over and over again, with new stories, comments and encouragements. We all share… Read more »
Congrats on your win, Christer. The story brilliantly captures the emotion of the reader. The ancient setting and the allegorical suggestiveness enrich its amazing quality.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you very much, Dipayan! Your words are very kind and very encouraging. And congratulations to your own victory. It’s a very well earned one since your story has a lot of meaning and quality.
You’re welcome, Christer.
Congratulations, Christer! Continue writing such stories!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWow, Katy! That’s probably the best comment one could ever wish for. Thank you! I will do my best, but I will have to rely on Spirit to be there and whisper in my ear. Or, should I say, my willingness to listen to It.
I’m quite sure you’ll be able to write more amazing stories since it’s known that history repeats itself. So keep writing, as I’m sure you will!
Congratulations on your grand prize win, Christer. Your story deserves it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you very much, Lotchie, I appreciate your kind comments.
What a delight it was, Christer, to see that this story made it into the eBooks Collection! It was one of my favorite stories this year, and reading the book gave me the chance to read it again. I see your Scream story also is in the book. You must be so happy and proud!
Indeed, Fuji, it make me very happy and proud that two of my stories were picked for this book. Since we have several talented writers in our group, and many great stories were sent in during the year, I feel honored to be in this excellent company. This specific story is very close to my heart and it was written on several levels. Partly it is about me and my twin brother,… Read more »
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