
A Childs Imagination
She wasn’t trespassing. Sadly, these houses were no longer homes. The smell of damp plaster wasn’t pleasant nor was gashing her knees as she clambered over the debris, but to a London child, a bombsite was an adventure playground. The war had taken many things but never a child’s imagination.
Running home, she couldn’t wait to immerse herself in warm soapy water. Mum would have the tin bath ready, in front of the fire.
She’d heard the shrieks as she’d climbed the stairs to the three rooms her family occupied in the dilapidated old house. She’d never seen her parents so excited.
Spotting her in the doorway, they’d grabbed her hands, swirling her around.
“We’re moving to a brand-new town!” her mum exclaimed. “Our very own house!”
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It was a lovely little terraced house… with a bathroom! A pretty garden at the back, complete with an apple tree. Overnight, her concrete playground had transformed into nature’s own.
But it was on a tree-lined street, while walking to school, that the true beauty of nature was revealed to her. And it took her breath away.
The cloudless blue sky was ablaze with an infusion of pink and the sweetest aroma filled the air. What was once an ordinary street had suddenly become wonderland. She wanted to reach up and grasp a piece of cherry heaven but the blossoms were too perfect to touch.
They reminded her of the words of a popular song.
It’s Cherry Pink and Apple Blossom White
When Your True Lover Comes Your Way
And she imagined a time when she’d meet her true love and, on their wedding day, she’d adorn her hair with apple blossom and carry a cherry blossom bouquet.
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But the joys of life are fleeting and a few short weeks later, reminiscent of a snowflake flurry, she watched the delicate petals begin to fall. Spring would give way to summer, autumn and winter before the cherry tree would bloom again. Until then, a cloudless blue sky and a glimpse of cherry heaven would be hers alone. Such is a child’s imagination.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleBeautiful story Linda that feels very much written from the heart. A joy to read.
Thank you Carrie. I did base this on some of my own experiences – London’s post-war slum clearance and being re-housed to a new town as a child. And I was that girl, on her way to school, that had her breath taken away by a row of cherry trees. Glad you enjoyed it.
I really like your writing style. Great story! ?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you very much Brigitta, that’s so nice to know and I really appreciate you reading my story and taking the time to comment. ?
Linda, I loved reading this. How beautiful that the family’s situation got better and that they could have their own house with a garden! Not to mention the beautiful Cherry-blossom lane! It sounds idyllic! It is easy to picture the protagonist fantasizing about her future love and wedding day. This is a lovely story!
Thank you so much Marianna, as I replied to Carrie, this story is partly based on my own life. Although we moved to a new town, my mum always missed London. Although I was only 9 years old when we left, I too had a fondness for it. Maybe that’s why I spent over 20 years working there. So glad you liked the story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou captured so much in this short story. The difference between city and country living. How hard life was after the war. I love how you created the beauty of cherry blossom.
Thank you Genya, you know how much I value your comments. Yes, life was very hard after the war. I didn’t really appreciate how hard as a child, it was only in the final years of my mum’s life when she came to live with me that we were able to spend more time talking and I got to understand what it was really like. They were a remarkable generation, the like… Read more »
So true, Linda! A child’s imagination is boundless as the possibilities are so many. I felt your story so much, even smelled the damp plaster at one stage!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks so much Greene, hope that smell wasn’t too unpleasant! But what more could a writer ask than to evoke the senses. I really appreciate your comment.
The little girl has a very vivid imagination, Linda. The darkness of war-weary London has been brilliantly illuminated by the light of adolescent imagination in the limited space.
That is the gift of imagination Dipayan, it can take us to another place. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.
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How nice to share your childhood memories in such a beautiful way. I enjoyed reading about the child’s reaction to the London Blitz. Thank you for such a sweet story.
There was so much more I could have written in that opening paragraph Susan but the wordcount beat me! Thanks for your lovely comments, I’m really glad you enjoyed the story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GooglePossibly write another story where you share more of the memories!
I, too, remember the blossom on the trees as I walked home from school as a child and thought it looked magical. Fortunately, I was blessed with a comfortable home but I can imagine the joy this child and her parents felt at moving to a new home. A beautiful story, Linda 🙂
That first sight of cherry blossom is certainly something that remains with you Sandra. Thanks for your kind comment.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThere is a lot of emotion in this story, Linda. The contrast is very stark between the two homes and their surroundings, war and peace. You manage well to communicate the feelings of the girl, going from curiosity, to thrill and happiness. There is a sadness at the end for the short lived excitement caused by the flowers, but also a longing for a promising future. Good job!
Thank you Christer. There really was a stark contrast which I believe meant she appreciated her new surroundings so much more.
I really like how you captured the child’s imagination in this piece, particularly through the song lyrics and the thoughts of a future wedding day.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI’ve always loved that song Danielle. I remember, as a junior dancer, we danced a rumba to it. It’s one of those songs that stays in your head! Thanks so much for your comments.
Hello again Linda, when I saw the title ”A Childs Imagination” it reminded me of growing up too, with lots of memories flooding my mind. Particularly of my Nan – I mentioned her in my story, of how she kept her purse wrapped with countless elastic bands. So I connected with you straight away, I hope you have written your story down for the grandchildren to read, for the war and the rebuild… Read more »
I remember that old saying Eric ‘take care of the pennies and the pounds will take care of themselves’. Your nan was very smart. Sadly I lost my only grandson, Harry, when he was 13 years old but I take comfort in that he spent many happy hours chatting to my mum. I’m glad you enjoyed the walk with me.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleLinda, I’m so sorry for your loss. Coming to terms with losing those close to us changes us, and being so young must have given you so many unanswered questions. I hope that this site may have helped you, and being a writer too, opens up the heart. When I was working I used to pass a school on my way, and I would see pennies just thrown away everywhere, picking them… Read more »
Thank you for your kind words Eric. When I write Harry is always in my thoughts. I have still to finish a story I read to him about Pluto, the downsized planet which he really liked. My neighbour has an amazing talent for drawing so if all goes to plan I would love to self-publish a picture book. Oh I love the Lambeth Walk, always a favourite at family parties! Those were… Read more »
Linda, there is a film that you must watch, I won’t say what it is about, except to say that it is a true story. I watched it on Netflix, after Kendall (my 4 year old granddaughter) told me that I had to. it is called – ”Penguin Bloom”.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleAnything recommended by a 4 year old has to be watched! I don’t have Netflix but I will definitely seek this one out. Harry loved penguins. Thanks Eric.
Hi Linda, you captured my heart so much. I feel it very much. The imagination of a child is very vivid and fantastic. I remember my childhood days when I keep imagining things when I am alone, that’s a funny thing to remember.
Hi Lotchie, yes our imagination can take us anywhere, I too imagined many things as a child. Thank you for your kind comments.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re welcome, Linda.