He couldn’t afford a real home. But he did have rich black soil, and a door, gifted from a stranger with midnight-blue eyes.

By day he planted an orchard. By night he slept beside the magnificent door.
He was content. Owning one thing of beauty was enough.

One morning, four sturdy walls appeared. A roof, a hearth, the first blossoms.
He called out, in gratitude and celebration, “Dear stranger, come! There is room enough for two.”

By day, they pick apples. By night, beneath midnight-blue skies, they fashion a door for the next gifting.

Enough, and more than enough.

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    Voice-Team
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    2 years ago

    A lovely tale combining realism with some gentle magic. Inspiring and comforting.

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    2 years ago

    This is a beautiful story with a great message. How amazing that although your protagonist had very little, he/she was happy to share with the next person and to pay it forward.

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    Reply to  Julie Harris
    2 years ago

    It is amazing how an image can inspire a story and how certain images will never leave you. I absolutely love your story.

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    2 years ago

    This is a very inspiring story, that even though the protagonist had little, he/she is content with all he/she had and willing to share it with other people. “Enough, and more than enough” – this phrase resonated with me, and I love it so much.

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    Reply to  Julie Harris
    2 years ago

    Yes, you are right Julie, You’re most welcome.

    Danielle Burke
    Danielle Burke(@danielle-burke)
    2 years ago

    I love the combination of the fantastical story with a solid theme.

    Christer Norrlof
    Christer Norrlof(@christer-norrlof)
    2 years ago

    I love the philosophy behind the thought that by feeling gratitude for the little you have, more will be given. Also, that it’s important to give when/as you have received. Great writing!

    Eric Radcliffe
    Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
    2 years ago

    Isn’t it amazing how something catches our imagination, and can lay there seemingly for ages, just waiting to germinate. Well written Julie.

    Katerina Bizirtsaki
    Katerina Bizirtsaki(@katerina-bizirtsaki)
    2 years ago

    What a lovely idea, Julie! I hope to see more stories of yours!

    Katerina Bizirtsaki
    Katerina Bizirtsaki(@katerina-bizirtsaki)
    Reply to  Julie Harris
    2 years ago

    That is really great to hear. I’ll look forward to them!

    Carrie OLeary
    Carrie OLeary(@carrie-oleary)
    2 years ago

    Congratulations Julie, an interesting tale.

    Susan Dawson
    Susan Dawson(@susan-dawson)
    2 years ago

    Congratulations. This is a real parable of a story. It is abut honest labour too. They don’t just sit behind their doors, they work the soil.

    Eric Radcliffe
    Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
    2 years ago

    Congratulation Julie, well deserved.

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    2 years ago

    Congratulations, Julie! This was truly inspirational and beautifully told.

    Linda Rock
    Linda Rock(@linda-rock)
    2 years ago

    Congratulations Julie, this is a truly inspiring story.

    Daisy Blacklock
    Daisy Blacklock(@daisy-blacklock)
    2 years ago

    This is a beautiful story. The repetition of the words ‘midnight-blue’ ties your story together really well. I also love the last line.

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    2 years ago

    Congratulations on your win, Julie.

    Fuji
    Fuji(@fuji)
    1 year ago

    Hello Julie. I’m slowly working my way through the “Eyes of the Soul” eBook and discovering or rediscovering some real treasures. This story is one of them. You’ve said so much with just 100 words, and left us with something memorable and inspiring. Congratulations for being selected for the eBook!

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