Bo grabbed a glass of the juice that Mom said he couldn’t have. He was late. She was not home anyway.

He barged through the door of the chess room.  “Hi,” he giggled, steadying himself against a waiter carrying a tray of orange juice. The waiter stared back in disbelief.
“May I have a…” Bo hiccuped, “… glass of that!” he pointed to the tray.

“There are so many people.” he thought. “These sets have hundred-odd squares. Strange…” Bo laughed at the scene. He sprawled himself on an ottoman. “I will wait here until the room stops spinning.”

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Eric Radcliffe
Eric Radcliffe (@eric-radcliffe)
1 year ago

Hello Marianna, it’s no wonder his mother said he couldn’t have a glass of juice, it will be Checkmate when she gets home. This hundred words leaves a lot to the imagination.

Katy Bizi
Katy Bizi (@katy-bizi)
1 year ago

Another well-written story, Marianna! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Katy Bizi
Katy Bizi (@katy-bizi)
1 year ago

You’re very welcome!

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Susan Dawson
Susan Dawson (@susan-dawson)
1 year ago

What have you been drinking, Marianna? (just joking)

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo (@lotchie-carmelo)
1 year ago

Hahahaha.That’s the reason why we need to listen to our mother’s advice. Because mothers know best especially our strengths and our weaknesses.

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo (@lotchie-carmelo)
10 months ago

Yes. That’s true, Marianna.

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Linda Rock
Linda Rock (@linda-rock)
1 year ago

Whoops! Bo’s inebriation takes me back to my teens Marianna. Especially the time, when as a 14 year old, I was left in charge of my younger cousins while the parents enjoyed a Saturday night out. If only I hadn’t found that bottle of vodka! Loved your story!

Fuji
Fuji (@fuji)
1 year ago

What an imaginative story, Marianna. I love the idea of a chess room, with its hundred odd squares. It feels like a cerebral Lewis Carroll moment, with pawns and knights instead of a tea party. It’s more than just a teenage inebriation! Love the orange juice and the ottoman – great “O” words that work well with his “O-rhyming” name.  ? 

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