
A Grocery Trip
Jamie knew that scowl, she had seen it many times since John had returned from Asia. She had even researched and found a condition called “reverse culture shock” that can occur when people return home from overseas after many years. Now she wondered what happened to her old friend. Maybe if she could reach him, the old John would return. She tried to dig deeper, and asked “If you miss China, why don’t you just go back?”
“Listen Jamie, please do not go there, I told you I am fine. The USA is my home now, and I will readjust.”
“I am not trying to push you, but at least tell me, honestly, what is the thing you miss most about Beijing?”
John wiped the scowl from his face, realizing that she just wanted to help.
“Well,” John said softly, “actually this may sound strange, but I miss the fact that in China, there are no guns.”
Jamie started to speak, when John abruptly headed for the door. “I need a walk. Did you say you wanted eggs?” Jamie nodded, and John quickly exited toward the neighborhood market.
The fresh air felt good. The smell of springtime surrounded the sidewalk, almost as if the air itself were running from the toxic fumes of the passing cars. This market was unique, with a nice large green lawn, and beautiful cherry trees that had been there for years.
Arriving on the lawn, John heard “Stop, no!” A paralyzing scream. Then another scream, and then several gunshots. He slowly sank to the ground. In a daze, he heard sirens and radios in the distance. “Active Shooter Alert” blasted over a loud speaker. He struggled to breathe, as the blood gushed from his chest. For a moment time stopped, as he gazed up at the sky. He saw an eagle flying, reminding him of his birthplace, America, the land of the free.
As he gasped, and took his last breath, he collapsed onto his back. Looking up, he saw the beautiful cherry blossoms, almost like heaven, in full bloom, a sign of eternal spring.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThis is such a beautifully written, sad story. Your protagonist must have felt so hopeless. What a horrible reality, to be worried about gunmen and senseless killings, constantly having to look over your shoulder. It was such a tragic end for him.
Marianna – Thank you for your thoughtful and supportive comment. As you said above, our realities can be horrible, especially if humans continually make horrible choices. What boggles the mind is that humans actually have the gift of “choice” or “free will” to decide their actions. This ability seems to be what separates us from animals, so I must hold onto the hope that someday humans may actually choose a peaceful existence.
What a horribly sad story. As soon as he said that the thing he liked best about China was that there were no guns, I had a feeling something awful was going to happen. Nicely done.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks Carrie – Maybe because of all the discouraging news here in the USA recently, I have not had the energy to write, so this is my first completed story in quite a while. I guess my recent “writers block” made completing this story a bit of a challenge. After completing this story, it seems writing is a therapeutic and positive way to process the barrage of recent harsh realities in our… Read more »
A moving story, producing strong emotions.
Hi Dipayan – Thanks for the support, I greatly appreciate your comment. All our recent news here in the USA moved me to write this story. ?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHeartbreaking. A simple trip to the grocery store. A beautiful April day. A truly horrible reminder of some of our current realities. Sometimes a well-told story is the best way to cultivate awareness. Well done.
I completely agree with Fuji – a well-told story is the best way to cultivate awareness. Very sad, thought-provoking and perhaps another step towards change. Well done!
Thanks Sandra, your feedback really means a great deal. Fiction writing is for sure a positive way to bring awareness to difficult issues in our society.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA sad story, with disaster striking at the moment of optimism and the protagonist’s decision to do his best to adapt. With the intention of buying eggs, the symbol for new life, he falls victim to violence and evil. Still, he is witnessing a symbol of eternal spring. There Is hope. Beautiful!
Hello again Culture Dragon, I have just made it to the beginning of the end to the stories. I decided this time to read from the end, not wanting the end writers to feel neglected. It’s good that you are back into the thick of it again, that is where your voice belongs. As I read your story I tried to place my self in your shoes, to see the story through… Read more »
What a tragic story and a very sad ending. But there is hope in there. I hope someday we all live a peaceful, happy life.
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