
Beware the Social Butterfly
Spring sunshine lights up stained-glass windows as I precede Abigail’s stick thin, hot off the catwalk bridesmaids, down the aisle. My curvaceous figure is a stark contrast to the supermodels sashaying behind. Had I not been humiliated enough?
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Abigail is what is known as a social butterfly. Fluttering her wings, she flits from person to person, room to room, captivating all before her, leaving behind a trail of broken hearts. If asked how many, would she remember? Would she care?
We’d shared a room at university. Someone obviously had a questionable sense of humour pairing me with the beautiful and charismatic Abigail.
At first, I was in awe, then cracks began to appear. She seemed devoid of empathy. Delighting in her conquests, showing no remorse for those she hurt, merely contempt.
Post-graduation, we agreed to stay in touch and I wasn’t surprised to hear she’d been snapped up by a modelling agency, while I secured a position with a prestigious city law firm.
Long hours achieving impossible deadlines, on my climb up the corporate ladder, left little time for socialising. That all changed when Cameron joined the firm. Tall, broad shouldered with an easy smile, he was everything missing in my life. We soon discovered we shared common interests and it wasn’t long before we were enjoying each other’s company outside of the office.
I’d never been so happy or felt so lucky. When the invitation to Abigail’s birthday party arrived, I accepted at once, eager to show him off.
The moment she greeted us at the door, I knew I’d lost him. What Abigail wanted, Abigail took. How naïve to think she wouldn’t take what I’d thought was mine. I left the party early, doubting they would even notice.
But one question continued to haunt me. Was love at first sight the reason she took him or just because she could?
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A vision in white; she might have been lifted from the cover of ‘Brides’ magazine. At the altar she turned and handed me her bouquet before leaning in and whispering ‘he’s mine now’.
I had my answer.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI hope Abigail gets her karmic payback that is for sure! I really feel for the poor protagonist! Very well written Linda!
Thanks so much Emily. I’m a great believer in Karma!
Such a heartbreaking story. I’ve met a few people like that along the way. Hopefully Cameron will eventually come to his senses and realise what he’s lost.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI tend to think he will Carrie. This is another story I’d like to extend but oh boy the list is getting longer and longer!
How poignantly heartbreaking Linda! How many of us have had a friend who is not really one, selfish, narcissistic and utterly fascinating. I felt the pain of the poor girl losing her man and her certainties too…
There will always be people who think nothing of destroying another’s relationship and where friendship means nothing. It means a lot to know that my protagonist’s pain and loss came through in my story. Thanks so much for commenting.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI am mentally throwing rotten tomatoes at Abigail’s snow white dress! Perhaps she will get what she deserves, for a man so easily ‘stolen’ could just as easily stray again ? But I hope he doesn’t try to go back to your main character – she deserves much better!
Ha ha, Abigail has really got under everyone’s skin! My job is done! Cameron, to me, is just very weak and easily swayed and I believe will rue the day he ever met Abigail. Will the marriage fail and will he try to get back to my MC? Probably, but she is a strong character and doubt she will even entertain that. Thanks for your comment Sandra which had me smiling … Read more »
A very captivating story, Linda! You caught my attention from the first paragraph and kept it right through the story, thanks to the great way you told it. My first reaction was that the relationship between Abigail and Cameron isn’t going to last. Both of them fall too easily for fresh, exterior attraction and it will soon happen again to both of them. I love your comment to Emily about Karma! Let’s… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks so much for your lovely comment Christer, and I agree with all you say. This marriage has failure written all over it.
Linda you know how to ruffle the readers feathers. If that had happened to my Gran…. when the priest/vicar says….Does anyone know of any…. She’d have yelled ”Yes”. Lots of fun Karma here in the waiting! And dare I say, a fun read?
I don’t intentionally go out to ruffle feathers Eric, it just happens that way! I love how passionately everyone feels about Abigail because I intentionally didn’t give her any redeeming characteristics. I think this story has legs and maybe my MC will shout out just like your Gran! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleGreat story, Linda! I think we have all known at least one Abigail, this story is relatable. I feel the protagonist’s pain. And the emotions have travelled fully from these words, to me the reader. Impressive work!
Thank you so much for your kind words Melissa. I’m really glad the emotion came through. Yes, sadly, there are far too many Abigails in this world. We can only hope they get their comeuppance.
Great story! I feel lucky that I don’t have friends like Abigail, but I do know girls like her. Karma has a lot of work with those, who think that they can take away everything they want.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYes, who needs enemies with friends like Abigail! Thanks Brigitta, I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
A very sad story. How could she make that mistake of taking her boyfriend to Abigail’s house knowing the kind of person she is? Well, I hope Abigail gets paid back for her ill deeds.
I think she trusted their friendship more than she should Thompson. I tend to think Abigail will at some point be paid back!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleNice piece, Linda.
Thank you Thompson, for reading and your comments.
Linda, I felt like yelling at Abigail from behind the computer screen! What an awful character she is! Sadly there are too many real-life people like her who will simply do something like this, just for the sake of proving that they can. This was well told.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThis story is very painful. I feel sorry for your protagonist, Linda. There are so many friends like that, traitor. I want to give Abigail a triple slap and tweak her hair. Well written, Linda.