I looked critically at the carpet, shaking my head. “You know, the Henry just isn’t up to the snuff anymore. Perhaps we need a different vacuum cleaner.”

A heavy sigh emanated from the under-stairs cupboard. Was one of the cats in there? A glance told me not.

“What about a Dyson? They’re supposed to be excellent. And, no wires to worry about.”

“Humph!” came from the cupboard, before the Henry trundled out. “Some of us have feelings you know. I have sinus problems. Ever thought of changing my bag?”

“But…What? You…” I stuttered. “I need a glass of wine.”

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    Reply to  Carrie OLeary
    2 years ago

    Glad to oblige!

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    2 years ago

    Poor Henry, being blamed while all the while they didn’t change his bag! Your story made me smile. I had trouble with our vacuum cleaner until my husband told me it was time to clean the bag so I can totally relate! Good story, Carrie!

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    2 years ago

    Honestly, Linda, I don’t have a vacuum cleaner at all. We don’t need it in our very simple bamboo nipa hut. So I need to re-read it thrice and do some research about Henry and Dyson, then I found out that the story is all about the vacuum cleaner and Henry and Dyson is a brand name of a vacuum. Poor little me 🙂

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    Reply to  Carrie OLeary
    2 years ago

    Really? Then Hetty was a nice name and cute. If God will give me a new baby girl, I will call her Hetty.

    Eric Radcliffe
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    Reply to  Lotchie Carmelo
    2 years ago

    This is a true story Lotchie. When the first vacuum cleaner was invented, a salesman goes into the less populated area, hoping to make more sales. He’s invited into the house to show off his new machine, that he claims is the wonder of all wonders – Let me show you how it works. Smiling, he empties a dust bag all over the carpet. The women gasps. Don’t worry he says reassuringly,… Read more »

    Lotchie Carmelo
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    Reply to  Eric Radcliffe
    2 years ago

    Hahahahaha  ?   ?   ?  poor lady. Then her carpet now is full of dust. And the seller is funny. hahahah lol. He should ask first if the client has electricity before putting all the dust on the carpet.

    Last edited 2 years ago by Lotchie Carmelo
    Eric Radcliffe
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    Reply to  Lotchie Carmelo
    2 years ago

    Lotchie, don’t worry I’m the vacuum in our house, that is why there is an extra ”U” in the word vacuum!

    Lotchie Carmelo
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    Reply to  Eric Radcliffe
    2 years ago

    hehehehehe. Eric, your family is very much happy because of that. No vacuum cleaner means energy-saving and fewer expenses.

    Linda Rock
    Linda Rock(@linda-rock)
    2 years ago

    Oh I do love a ‘Henry’, always suspected there was a real character behind that happy face. Great job bringing a vacuum cleaner to life Carrie, inspirational!

    Julie Harris
    Julie Harris(@julie-harris)
    2 years ago

    I loved everything about this story – the subtle reference to Asimov, the humor, learning that in England you give your vacuum cleaners names. Henry is so much better than Electrolux! I especially enjoyed Eric’s story to Lotchie about the salesman, the dirt and the electricity. Much laughter from one story!!

    Eric Radcliffe
    Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
    2 years ago

    This is a wonderful fun story Carrie. I love the thought that everyone can laugh, join in the story relating it to their own experiences. When I read the comments, it seems to me that the comments take the form of roads we walk, as we read, meeting friends along the way, can stop to chat, laugh, and then move on.

    Daisy Blacklock
    Daisy Blacklock(@daisy-blacklock)
    2 years ago

    A very unique story, and also quite funny ? . Great writing!

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