Give Me Wings So I Might Fly
I have been known for a great many things; artist, sculptor, mathematician, astronomer, geologist and engineer. My skills are sought by dukes and monks. But, it’s not enough. Dear Lord, if you are listening, give me wings so I might fly.
I look through the diagrams of my flying machines. Feeling doubt, both in myself and in my works, I mutter, “Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake.”
I’d been so sure they would work, yet they didn’t. I’d designed them meticulously, sketched them out in detail, I knew what materials should be used, from wooden frames to taffeta sails. Birds and bats can fly, I’ve emulated the design of their wings on my flying machines. And yet, still they will not work. Sighing deeply, I walk outside to watch the setting sun.
It’s as I stand there, in the silent evening, that I see the starlings out of the corner of my eye. My focus is drawn to one as it ducks and dives, soaring through the twilit sky. Its movement is captivating, I can imagine how its tiny heart beats the blood through the veins to those muscles, powering every sweep of the wings. I gasp with realisation. Simplicity really is the ultimate sophistication.
Starlings flock in the Florentine evening, forming a great murmuration, their plumage shining with iridescence in a sky painted gold, crimson and ochre by the setting sun. The Arno runs like a river of blood towards Pisa.
I know now, in my heart, why my flying machines won’t work. The starlings have shown me. I go back indoors, pull a parchment towards me and write, ‘Nature is the source of all true knowledge. She has her own logic, her own laws, she has no effect without cause nor invention without necessity.’
I understand now why my flying machines don’t work. I continue, ‘Human subtlety will never devise an invention more beautiful, more simple or more direct than does nature because, in her inventions, nothing is lacking and nothing is superfluous.’
One day I will fly.
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Editors Note: The italicized sections are actual quotes from this great man. We’ll let you figure out who he is!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA compelling look inside the mind of a Renaissance genius. The story captures the unique perspective of an artist/scientist in its descriptions and dramatic tensions. Excellent story.

Thank you so much. I just knew I had to write about Leonardo Da Vinci for this prompt, I just hope I did his desire for flight justice.
I just absolutely love this. It’s written so well. The style you’ve written meshes perfectly with the quotes. I think you did him justice!
I’m off to go watch Ever After now, “then I shall have to make you wings!”… or maybe play The Ezio Collection. Hint hint* 😉
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYes, it makes me feel like I really could know him. If I could ever go back in time, I think he’d be the one person I would love to meet. Thank you for your lovely comments
I love how you’ve written your story around such memorable quotes Carrie. Brilliantly done. Worthy of a smile from the Mona Lisa. ?
Thank you Linda. The great man had such a wonderful way with words. I just hope I did him justice.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI could feel his frustration and desire in equal measure. For such a great intellect I could imagine how difficult it must have been to not be able to solve this. This is an amazing story. I felt like I was there in his studio as he jotted down his notes and observations. Well done!
Thank you for you kind comment. His inventions were so incredible and ahead of his time. I would love to have met him, to see him in action.
Leonardo must really have felt that: the yearning to succeed, the fear of failure, the pride in his work, the joy in finding a solution to the problem. I felt the warm air of the Florentine landscape. I simply loved your story Carrie!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for taking the time to comment Greene, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.
Well done, Carrie. I feel as though I have been transported back in time and am actually there with the great man. I think you’ve captured what would very likely be his thoughts and actions perfectly 🙂
Thanks so much Sandra. I’d love to be transported back in time to meet him
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA beautiful portrait of this truly remarkable Renaissance man. I loved the fascinating quotations you used which were new to me.
I also love it that you, just like I did in my story, mentioned murmurations of starlings, here as an important inspiration for the master. Did he actually write about that or is this your theory?
Congratulations to a great story!
Hi Christer, thanks for taking the time to comment. I know that Leonardo wrote quite a lengthy document of around 35,000 words called the ‘Codex on the Flight of Birds’. Whether or not he mentioned murmurations I do not know, but I have seen there are some quite incredible murmurations over Florence this day and age, so I felt sure that they would have been present back in the 15th Century and… Read more »
Carrie, you are a great writer who has inspired and entertained us many times, but this is one of your very best. We are there with Leonardo, frustrated visionary genius. His achievements are legendary – truly one of our greatest minds. And yet, this challenge was beyond him. I wonder what he would have thought of Orville and Wilbur, and especially of the huge, heavy giants that carry us through the skies… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you so much Fuji. I greatly admire Leonardo, though I am far more fascinated with his inventions than his art. He was so far ahead of his time, and it is heartbreaking that there is no evidence to show that he actually managed to fly himself, although his later designs were shown as workable. I’m sure he would be filled with wonder if he could see the flying machines of today.
That beginning is so powerful, Carrie! We would think he had everything, but that dream still remained. That so often seems to be the case with those who are gifted.
Thank you Danielle. He was a true visionary. I wonder what he would have thought if he knew that (wo)men would not only fly, but also walk on the moon. ??
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Carrie, I’d like to think that in the end we did fly, perhaps not as in nature.
But then I guess, Leonardo would have been first in the queue to buy a ticket on the first flight.
I’m sure that he would be stunned if he could see the aircraft of today, but I think he’d prefer to try out a hang-glider or microlight for the feel of the air against his face.
I really like your style, the words you choose. The quotations were a great choice. Well done!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you Brigitta. He wrote so many meaningful things, but these quotations just felt as though they were meant for this subject matter.
You always really amaze me with your stories, Carrie. Congratulations. This is one of your best stories. I love it.
Thank you for your kind comment, Lotchie. I’ve long admired his various machines, so it was a fun and interesting story to write.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re welcome, Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
Cheers Lotchie ?
Cheers, Carrie.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations Carrie, a unique and beautifully written story.
Thank you Linda. Such a great man, I’m glad I had the opportunity to write something about him.
I’m so glad this was a winner, such an amazing piece ? ?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCheers Ems, LdV is such an inspiration ?
congratulations Carrie! I am so pleased for you and our friend Leonardo! I so love your story!
Thank you Greene, it’s not my usual style of writing, but I have so much admiration for his work. I knew I wanted to write a story about him as soon as I saw the prompt. The title came to me immediately!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations on a well-deserved win, Carrie. This is a superb story, one of your best!
Thank you Julie, the man himself inspired me for this one I think ?
Congratulations, Carrie! Today the great man salutes you 🙂 Well done!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you Sandra, hopefully I gave him wings, just for a little while ??
Congratulations to your win, Carrie! Well deserved.
Thank you Christer, I really enjoyed writing this one
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations, Carrie! I could feel the frustration in the beginning of being unable to figure out how to fly, but then came that moment of enlightenment while watching the starlings. This is a beautiful story.
Thank you Marianna, he did a major study on the flight of birds later in life, so he truly did have a greater understanding.
It’s such a joy to read this excellent story again, Carrie. It is a shining example of flash fiction, and what a great writer can achieve in only 350 words. I’m so happy it was included in the eBook. You make us all proud to be in the club with you! As I said before, this is one of your very best stories.
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