
Close Call
“Go to the hospital!”
Scared stiff, Sara swung around. Who had spoken? She was alone in her apartment. And yet, she had heard a voice, loud and clear, coming from right behind her.
She calmed down, decided that her imagination had played a trick on her and proceeded with her preparations. Today was the day she would visit her son and she was eager to leave.
In the second she put her hand on the doorknob, ready to leave, the voice spoke again, “Go to the hospital!” This time, it sounded even more determined.
‘Who is there?” she said aloud. “Who is talking to me?”
Only silence surrounded her.
*
In the car, Sara was pondering what had happened. How could a voice, coming from her own imagination, sound so real?
She set out on the highway in the direction of her son, trying to focus on the traffic.
After a few minutes’ driving, she heard the order, “Go to the hospital!” again, this coming from the back seat. She almost swirled off the road, again shocked by the mysterious voice.
This time, she decided to obey.
*
As she walked into the emergency department, Sara wondered, “What am I going to say? There is nothing wrong with me. This is ridiculous!”
“I have a terrible headache,” she told the receptionist, feeling embarrassed for telling a lie.
*
After having studied various lab tests and examined her carefully, the doctor sat down with Sara.
“I’m sorry, Mrs Svensson, but we just can’t find anything,” he said. “I suggest that you come back later if your problem persists. It could be the effect of stress or weather changes.”
*
Next thing she knew, she woke up in a hospital bed. Feeling a thick bandage over her skull, she slowly opened her puffed-up eyes. She saw her son sitting by the bedside with a worried look on his face.
Sara made an effort to speak, “What… happened?”
“Mother, you had a very severe rupture of a blood vessel in your brain. If you hadn’t already been in a hospital, nothing could have saved you!”
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWow! I love how you built the tension in the story. Of course, I was expecting she would find her son at the hospital. A great twist and very lucky she listened to those mysterious voices. Well done – I thoroughly enjoyed reading it 🙂
Thank you, Sandra. For your information, and for the sake of other readers, I would like to point out that I met this woman at a spiritual meeting in Sweden about 20 years ago. She told me this story about herself and, of course, it made a deep impression on me. To illustrate her story, she lifted her hair and showed me a big scar on her skull.
I think you honoured her with your story, Christer. It makes it even more special knowing it is based on fact. Although not always as dramatic, we often have a voice or feeling that we should go down a particular path; how or why is a mystery but a very fortunate one!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA spirit guide? A guardian angel? One might wonder but it doesn’t really matter. I loved the way you build the tension with your invisible deus ex machina’s stark advice and the resulting good outcome for the lady. Inspired!
I think there is a great, unknown reality within and without ourselves that humanity can’t grasp with the intellect that normally serves us. Therefore, we can’t use it in our everyday life for our advantage. We just have to be humble and try to stay connected with that part of our minds that is connected to the rest of creation.
PS Thanks for your generous comment, Greene.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYes, Christer, I think we were all sitting on the edges of our seats as we read through the paragraphs. Then to find out that this is based on a true story – incredible. You do seem to have the most amazing situations in your real life that lend themselves beautifully to your skill with the written word. Congratulations on another well-written story!
I feel so grateful to have this opportunity to share some fascinating memories that I have accumulated during the years. There aren’t many, but some interesting stories have been passively sitting there, waiting for the chance to come out which they deserve. Thank you very much, Fuji, for cheering me on!
A very powerful story Christer. It goes to show that, every now and again, we really ought to listen to the voices in our head. One of the ladies I used to look after always seemed able to predict when her husband was going to have another stroke. Well written and captivating read.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Carrie, for reading and commenting. How interesting that the woman was able to predict her husband’s strokes! I know that there are dogs that can be trained to sense when their owners are going to have a seizure. It seems as though such help belongs to a future generation. You are right that we should listen more to our intuition. Today, we are trained to only rely on the experts.
They’d been married for sixty years and she’d cared for him like a child all their married life. She knew every nuance of his behaviour, so anything even slightly out of the ordinary made her worry. I believe that helped her with her predictions. It was really extraordinary to observe.
This story is wonderful. There is so much, as humans, that we don’t understand. I found the build-up in this story exciting. Whether it was luck or something else I feel you’ve given the reader something to think about. Another great story Christer, congratulations!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI am glad that you liked the story, Melissa. Thank you for your kind words. Who knows where the source of this strange voice came from? Maybe we have unknown and invisible spirits around us? And who knows, if that is the case, how they try to communicate with us? There is definitely more to this world than we are aware of.
I absolutely agree with everything you’ve said. I’d only add that knowing everything there is to know would make things terribly boring. Can’t wait to see what you come up with next!
A gripping story Christer with an unexpected twist. Like others, I too was imagining the worse for her son. I was also thinking exactly what Fuji commented re. your life experiences. You say you are grateful to share them. We are equally as grateful to read them. Keep them coming!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you very much, Linda. I really appreciate your words. Isn’t it funny that there are so many things, even important ones, in our lives that we totally forget about, and then there are other things, even told by others, that are stuck rock solid and for ever in our minds? From the moment the woman told me this story, which happened in the summer of 1992, it has been so clear… Read more »
It is great Christer and you are so right, some conversations really do impact you and stay with you always.
Wow! I love this story. It just reminded me of a story I should have written. My younger sister has also had a similar experience.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThough my sister’s wasn’t surgery, it was that of hearing a guiding voice. When she narrated her encounter to me, it sounded so incredible. I’m glad you are confirming her story.
I hope I’m not discouraging you from writing that story about your sister, Thompson. Maybe you can find a later theme where it fits in. I would love to read it. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
I found myself willing her to listen to that insistent voice – thank goodness she did!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleJust like in the old fairytales, there were three repetitions. Probably, without the third and last one, she wouldn’t have acted on the message. I’m glad you got emotionally envolved in the story, Clare.
What a nice twist in the end, Christer. I love it so much.
Thank you for reading and commenting, Lotchie.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re welcome, Christer.