Slither
I jerk awake as my cheek slips from where it rested against the palm of my hand. I’d been lulled to sleep from the sheer boredom of pouring through Uncle Monty’s haphazard notes, under the gentle rocking motion of the boat.
I’m not even sure why I’m here, except that I’d received a letter from Monty, posted just a few days before he disappeared, instructing me to look through his journals if he didn’t return. His notes had seemed so preposterous but, at the same time, I was utterly intrigued. It became a mystery I couldn’t let go.
Uncle Monty’s letter claimed he’d located the chain of islands where Sarpedon, home of the Gorgons, sisters of Medusa, is located. The sensible side of me insists this is a myth. My more curious side is fascinated by Monty’s findings. His notes are so thorough, and well researched, that even my sensible side starts to believe.
So, I’ve sailed west from Gibraltar into the Atlantic Sea, where they’d reportedly found Monty’s empty boat. Now I’ve come to a dead end. I have no idea where he went from here. All I’ve found thus far is open ocean, though a low sea fret hangs over it that never burns away in the heat of the sun.
I pick up a journal and thrust it into the pile of discarded notes. A piece of paper flutters out, which I ignore until I notice the large red circle around some text with the words Sarpedon, Stheno and Euryale scrawled next to it. I read:
At wax of summer’s moon before the morning sun crests the horizon,
Follow the shrieking cry of the Harpy through the mists of time and space.
Thence will you come to Sarpedon, home of beings most monstrous
Tarry not overlong, or remain forever to harken to the Siren’s song.
This is it, the information I’ve been missing. Somewhere out there, amid the misty fret, is the island I seek. I can only hope that Uncle Monty will still be there, although whatever else I find will be a completely different story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleLoved it, Carrie! I can’t help hoping that the protagonist is carrying a reflective surface with him. It’ll come in handy when he meets the three serpent-haired ladies on the mysterious island he is seeking. I enjoyed the echoes of HP Lovecraft your story is evoking!
Thank you Greene. I’m sure my protagonist will be hoping that his Uncle Monty’s notes are correct in that Perseus did indeed kill Medusa, so there are only her older ‘sisters’, Stheno and Euryale to overcome. Medusa, though, was actually a mortal, whereas Stheno and Euryale are immortal, so they may pose a little more problem, but as my protagonist said, that will be a completely different story 😉
This is another very entertaining and educational Greek Mythology suitable for the “Mystery” theme. Hopefully, they can overcome Stheno and Euryale on the Island of Cisthene. It is a nice read, Carrie. Good job.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Lotchie. Thanks for commenting. Glad you enjoyed the story ?
My knowledge of mythology is limited but, once again Carrie, you have ignited my curiosity and I will make time to read more. I enjoyed the gradual building of excitement from the boredom in the first paragraph until he found the missing information. Well done!
Thanks Sandra. I just hope that the story didn’t feel cut off in its prime; their was so much more I wanted say.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI love Greek mythology. I hope he is carrying a mirror with him in case the journal is showing the way. An intriguing story which has so much potential to be developed into a longer adventure.
Thanks Genya. I do have a lot of ideas, so there is definitely a good chance this will be extended. You don’t realise just how short 350 words is until you’re trying to fit a complete story in to it. There was just so much more that I wanted to say.
I could tell from reading this that you wanted to write more.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI felt drawn in by the story and the myths and wanted to both learn more about the characters and especially what happened next. Good to leave it on a cliff hanger!
Thanks for commenting Clare. I originally intended to get a bit more in the story, but still finish on a cliff hanger, but then this felt like a more appropriate place to pause. I certainly have plenty of ideas as to how it can progress.
What a lovely story, Carrie. I hope Uncle Monty was still there?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThanks Thompson, as my protagonist said, that’ll be a completely different story ?
Congratulations, Carrie! This is one of those stories where I would love to read more. A great mystery. Well done.
Thanks Marianna; maybe one day!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA great story, Carrie! Congratulations on your second place public voting win.
Thank you Fuji, not quite as good as your win, I’m just lucky to have a group of friends and family who like to support my writing 🙂
Congratulations! A well deserved one, Carrie.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you Thompson. I like mixing Greek mythology with the modern day. I’d like to take this story further
Congratulations on your second win, Carrie. Good job.
Thank you Lotchie, would love to see a 350 word story from you next time too. We’re all here for help and support if you need it 🙂
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re welcome, Carrie.
And thank you for your encouragement, I really need it. And I am hoping that I can do it.