
The Demon Beneath Her Bed
She laid crumpled at her mother’s door so long her tears dried but the door remained firmly locked.
“Mommy,” the little girl whispered.
She wouldn’t dare actually raise her voice and wake her mother; she’d likely be spanked. Again. The darkness was better.
“Ugh!” she cried, standing up with sudden courage and heading down the hall.
“This is my room” She announced, barging through the doorway.
“You’re under my bed! And I’m going to sleep!”” She said, executing a running leap into it.
Her courage evaporated instantly. Anxiety stole the warmth from her blankets; her panicked breathing filled the room. This was a bad idea!
Yet she could not move a muscle. She laid frozen to the bed in fear, slow tears welling in her eyes. The hours dragged on but she did not sleep.
Her mother would not come. She never had, never would. From under the bed came a low, inhuman chuckle.
The girl swallowed.
“Why … me?”
The voice was gravelly, old, and it echoed faintly. “You are always alone.”
It was true and she knew it.
The silence stretched so long it was the demon that spoke first.
“Facing your fears tonight?”
“You,” she said distantly, “come out.”
It gave a questioning growl.
“Come on top of the bed with me.”
There was a long, very long pause at the odd command then a heavy dragging sound, and quick scramble of claws against wood. Her bed gave a great whine of protest under his weight and his full presence loomed above her widened eyes.
Neither moved.
Suddenly she threw her arms around the creature with a slightly hysterical giggle.
“You’re furry! Like a dog!”
He hesitated in the embrace before finally saying with deliberate dignity, “I am no dog.”
“I always wanted a dog,” she murmured.
The demon shrugged off her arms, strolling across the bed on all fours.
“Wait!”
“I’m not going anywhere.” He snapped, settling on the pillow. The girl actually smiled as she hurried to cuddle against him.
“Go to sleep,” he grumbled as she stroked his fur. “You have school in the morning.”
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleSweet/Scary RunnerUp: Another truly sweet story. We love the “scary” monster that could turn into a best friend for the lonely little girl. A gentle, lovely story.

Ha, I love the progression of this story, from the rigid fear to the relaxing of the anxiety. Really great stuff!
Thank you, I went for more of a “happy ending” in this one.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI love your happy ending, Ayah! A wonderful story that left me with a big smile 🙂
Lol thank you, I must have rewritten it 3 or 4 times!
I like it that your story included a practical example of “facing one’s fear,” Ayah. This might even be better than having an imaginary friend. I hope your protagonist found a true friend in her demon.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you. I really hope so too, the little girl could use one.
I really enjoyed reading this story! Even though it’s light hearted in the end, the loneliness of the girl really comes through. Imagine being so lonely you would snuggle a monster! Nice work.
Thank you! No matter how hard I tried I couldn’t develop it like I originally wanted to and still have words left for the ending; I wasn’t sure if the loneliness would come through after I cut it all out. I spent so much time revising the story I didn’t have any time left for the cover!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleFear has been successfully used in the tale. Here it has originated from an imagined danger. Good work!
Excellent. I really liked this ending that made me smile. Overcoming your fear is tremendous self-success. Good job.