
Midnight Blue Sky
Thunder rolled in the distance after lightning exploded in the sky.
“What was that?” She woke up with a jump. She grabbed her wrist watch from the bedside table. “Quarter to eight!” she exclaimed. Her breath became faster as her heartbeat rushed through her eardrums. ‘How come no one woke me up? I’m going to be late!’ she wondered.
She was dressed in a flash. A smattering of mascara and eyeliner was applied. “Where are my shoes?” she mumbled as she leopard-crawled across the carpet to peek beneath the bed. Dark objects caught her attention. ‘There they are.’
She stretched to reach the shoes in the farthest corner. ‘This is not working.’ She looked around for something to use to pull it closer. She grabbed a hanger hanging from the cupboard door handle and tried again. “Come on,” she whispered, pulling the shoes closer. Her fingertip brushed against the laces. “Finally!” she exclaimed, giving an exasperated sigh.
A quick glance in the mirror revealed that her attire was acceptable for the new office job, which she started the week before.
Another burst of thunder made her flinch as she stormed towards the voices coming from the lounge.
“Hi, sweetheart,” said Mom.
She opened her mouth and her frustration flared up like the lightning outside. “Why didn’t anyone wake me up?” she asked. “I’m so late for work!” It was only then that she noticed her uncle and aunt seated across from Mom.
The room was filled with puzzled looks. It erupted with laughter.
She muttered under her breath, “This is crazy.” “Being late for work isn’t amusing in the least.” Uncle Bob yanked up the curtain, just enough to let her see through. She looked up at the midnight blue sky. Her face was marked with a large frown. Her gaze followed the time on the clock on the wall. ‘Why is it dark out at eight o’clock?’ she puzzled.
In a fog, she gazed at Mom. Her mind refused to allow her to comprehend what she was seeing.
Mom chuckled, “Its eight o’clock in the evening!”
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleFunny story Marianna. Your protagonist will have to invest in a 24 hour watch / clock so she doesn’t make the same mistake again. Good job 🙂
Carrie, that would definitely have helped! ? Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it.
Marianna, you moved the reader deftly though so many emotions- fear, anger , panic and humour.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for your kind comment, Margarida. I’m glad you liked it.
Your story reminded me of my younger days, when I could sleep so deep that I was totally confused when I woke up. I’m sure this has happened to some young person close to you, Marianna! And it sure is something to remember and laugh about many years after. Good story!
Thank you so much for your comment, Christer. I was the same when I was younger, I could sleep so deep day or night! The story was based on my own experience when I was younger. I was completely convinced I should have been at work, after falling asleep late afternoon. It was quite funny afterwards!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Marianna loved your story. It just sounds like something I would do! So many different emotions in there – well done.
I am happy that you liked the story, Sandra. That confusion when you have just woken up can really make you feel disorientated ?
I like your story, Marianna, because I believe many of us have been through something similar and we can all recognise ourselves in your protagonist, well done!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI am glad you liked it, Greene. Thank you for your comment ?
So funny and entertaining, Marianna. I also went through this situation before. It is so funny to go back and remember this kind of event. Well done, Marianna.
It is such a horrible feeling when you wake up like that, but so funny afterwards, Lotchie ? I am happy that you liked the story.
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A great story Marianna and one many can relate to! I remember, in the past, jumping out of bed in a panic to get to work only to find it was a Sunday! Nicely done!
Thank you, Linda! It seems this happened to most of us! ?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThis definitely brings back memories of panic for me, Marianna. Something similar actually happened to me the other day. This story was fun and entirely relatable! Great work.
Melissa, thank you for your kind comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
A very funny story. As others have said entirely relatable. I think you captured that mad panic and frustration when little things take an age and then the mix of relief/anger/laughter when realisation dawns that there is nothing to panic about!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GooglePaul, thank you for your comment. I agree, in that moment when you realise your mistake you have an influx of a variety of feelings ? I’m glad you liked the story.
This is so funny because I have the same problem too.???? I loved the ending, nice story.