What you remembered about Mrs. Green was just how forgettable she was. Average height. Nondescript face. Boring drab clothes. No one looked at her twice and that was a mistake.

Do not read a book by its cover. Mrs. Green looked like a commonplace housewife. Actually, her forgettable characteristics oddly gave her the edge. So one year in her olive green indescribable coat, she could be a government spy. The next year, she could be a covert diamond thief. And the next, a leader for operations in exotic countries. 

Presently, the mysterious Mrs. Green would just play at being boring. 

      

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Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo (@lotchie-carmelo)
2 months ago

Oh, poor and mysterious Mrs. Green. This story is so intriguing, Margarida. Good job. 

Heather C
Heather C (@heather-c)
2 months ago
Reply to  Margarida Brei

Ooooo, Agatha Christie! My favorite and obviously she has had a great impact on your writing style.

Julie Harris
Julie Harris (@julie-harris)
1 month ago
Reply to  Margarida Brei

I immediately thought of Mr. Brown in Partners in Crime. No one could quite describe him, but he was everywhere. Agatha Christie is such a great mentor for all of us!

Heather C
Heather C (@heather-c)
2 months ago

Loved this story and…would love to hear more about Mrs. Green’s adventures. I think you have the beginnings of a longer tale here!

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Linda Rock
Linda Rock (@linda-rock)
2 months ago

I love your Mrs. Green, Margarida, a mysterious character I’d really enjoy reading more about. Great story.

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