Eden sat quietly contemplating the bush as the crimson buds burst into American Beauties against the deep green leaves. She burst into fresh tears, not tears of sorrow, but tears of joy. Eden and Edward Greenfield had been trying for two years to no avail and now she was past the danger point.
“I’m so happy, sweetheart,” Edward said upon learning the news.
Eden, beaming, responded, “I guess we were just trying too hard.”
“What about a name?” Edward asked.
Eden looked contemplative again, “Rose.”
“Perfect,” he said, handing her one of the long-stem Beauties.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleIt is a sweet little story. I was so carried away by the emotion of your story. I love it. Is the picture your drawing?
Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, it’s original artwork.
You’re most welcome, Brinda. Nice artwork. You are blessed to have many talents. I am excited to read more stories from you.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleBrinda you truly captured the protagonists’ pride.
Welcome to Voice.club, Brinda. This is a lovely, heartwarming tale. You’ve managed to convey so much emotion into such few words. Nicely done 🙂
A lovely story Brinda, one that touches the heart. Welcome to Voice-Club and good luck in the contest.
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