The Green Jacket
“Mr. Carson, please relax, we must tighten your jacket.”
“That’s Dr. Carson to you! Where is my green jacket?”
“Dr. Carson, white will fit better, and look dashing for dinner.”
“Will my beautiful daughter Eve be joining us for the meal?”
“No sir.”
“I prefer to dine on the yacht tonight, with wine, caviar, and candles!”
“Relax sir, quick prick, stay still.”
The nurse instructed her new intern: “This patient lost his mind after the brutal murder of his daughter while at University in 2008. Humor him, keep the straight jacket tight, sedatives every eight hours.”
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleTottering on the edge between madness and rationality, the reader tries to find the truth between the lines. Well-written, full of suspense.
A strait jacket looks so ominous, Chris.
Yes, Margarida, it’s so sad because in the past, Mr. Carson wore a beautiful green dinner jacket when he dined with his family on special occasions.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello, Chris. It’s intriguing and scary. Poor Mr. Carson. He went through a tragic life event when his daughter was brutally murdered. Well done, Chris.
Hi Lotchie. Yes, you are right. Mr. Carson was a good man, who endured a devastating event.
Unfortunately, parts of this story were based on real-life events, which you can research if you Google “Eve Carson – 2008 Murder”.
Hello, Chris. Sorry for the late response. I have a problem with the Electricity and Internet connection here in my place due to the bad weather we have experienced.
How tragic that happens to Ms. Eve Carson. She inspires everyone in her community because of her great achievements and contributions to society. I am happy that her family got justice when Demario James Atwater and Laurence Alvin Lovette Jr. were imprisoned.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWell written contrast between the jackets.
Hi Susan. I have been slammed at work, so just now getting back to the Voice Club. I have read many of your great stories, so coming from you, this comment means a lot.
I had to be a bit careful with this micro, since as Lotchie discovered in her research above, parts of this story are based on a tragic true event.
A great topic to work on, excellent Chris. I enjoyed a lot. Thanks for sharing.
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