
Ode to Apollo’s Peony
Apollo drew back his bowstring and loosed an arrow, sighing as it soared passed the target and punched into a distant tree.
“Brother,” Artemis laughed, “Where is your head today? It most certainly isn’t in our game.”
“It makes you wonder what he is thinking about, sister.” Aphrodite watched Apollo shrewdly, brow furrowing. She’d seen that look on his face before.
Apollo let another arrow fly, this time hitting the edge of the target. He huffed out a sigh of frustration and flung his bow aside, storming off down the forest path.
Artemis looked at Aphrodite and shrugged, bending down to retrieve the fallen bow before plucking the arrows from the target.
Aphrodite silently followed her half-brother’s footsteps through the forest, determined to find out what he was doing, sure he was keeping a secret.
Eventually the forest opened out into a glade, a lake in the middle, a group of nymphs—the Naiads—at the edge, all vying for the attention of the god.
He wasn’t interested in any of them, instead looking out towards a rocky outcropping in the centre of the lake where another nymph sat, blatantly ignoring Apollo as she idly combed out her long blonde curls with her fingers and weaving flowers around her crown.
“Paeonia,” cried Apollo, “Why won’t you speak to me? My love for you is boundless.”
The nymph turned her back on him.
“Paeonia, your hair is like spun gold, sparkling in the sunlight. Won’t you come to me?”
Paeonia coyly glanced over her shoulder. She gave him a gentle smile.
“Your beauty is greater than that of my sister, Aphrodite. Won’t you come to me, Paeonia?”
His words angered Aphrodite. No one was as beautiful as she. In a fit of anger she pointed at Paeonia with all her godly magic and sent a command.
There was a brilliant white flash over the island. When it cleared a single pink peony swayed in the middle of the island. Apollo’s cry of anguish filled the air.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThe myth of the peony, skillfully retold. Great characterization and drama, with a sad and sweet end.

Thank you Voice-team, I know you’ve already gone to the trouble of adding a couple of question marks. I’m surprised this one got through as it was a last minute rush to do it, I’d already done the research for it, but only had the last 75 minutes before closing to write it and get it submitted—with the menfolk in my life interrupting every couple of minutes—and didn’t have time for a… Read more »
Thank you again 🙂
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleBeware of an angry goddess’ jealousy! A real classic, Carrie. It reminds me of Athena’s punishment against Arachne! Great story!
Thank you, Greene, there are so many wonderful greek myths. I’m playing a game at the moment called ‘Immortals: Fenyx Rising’ and Zeus and Prometheus talk about loads of different mean things that the gods and goddesses did to each other as well as to the demigods, humans etc. The ones concerning peonies were new to me though—I found two: this one and another concerning Asclepius and his apprentice, Paeon, who he… Read more »
I love your Greek mythology stories, Carrie, I learn so much. How evil is Aphrodite, putting her vanity before her half-brother’s happiness. A great read.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Linda. They were all so incredibly mean to each other. They almost make the Norse gods look like pussy cats sometimes—or perhaps not ?
A truly enjoyable read. I love your finest Greek mythology, Carrie. Well done.
Thank you, Lotchie. Glad you enjoyed my latest trip into Greek mythology 🙂
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou are welcome, Carrie.
Excellent work, Carrie. Well done.
Thank you, Steven. I find Greek mythology fascinating, so it’s always fun trying to create a story around the prompt.
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