Captivated
His eyes were the deepest blue of midnight, glittering with possibility and promise. Stars were born in those inky depths, and she felt she might be falling, losing herself amidst that swirling galaxy.
Her lips parted on a soft exhale, tension slipping away. Strong arms saved her from collapse as her body went limp, and still she couldn’t tear her gaze from his.
“Lara,” he whispered, his face mere inches away.
His sensual mouth curved in a wicked smile, revealing sharp, white fangs. She had time to feel only a fleeting sense of panic before she lost herself entirely.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI more than like this, Emily, I love it. Great writing, and certainly—captivating! Very nicely done!
Thank you very much ?
Oh Emily, you had me floating in a romantic haze right up until that final paragraph! What a twist, absolutely brilliant! And so well written, as always.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHahaha always happy to throw in a twist! Glad you enjoyed it ❤
Wow! What a brilliant story. I was carried away until the twist came at the end. Love it. You are great writer, as always. Well done.
Thank you so much Lotchie, you’re too kind ?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou are welcome, Emily.
That first paragraph is so beautiful, Emily. You had me captivated with your superb choice of words. Then the surprise ending knocked me over! Great writing.
Thank you so much for the kind words, Fuji! ❤
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleAdored your powerful opening sentence; it really pulled me into what I thought would be a romantic flash fiction.
Thank you Margarida! “Looks can be deceiving” is definitely the theme in this one, both for my characters and my readers!
Yes, Emily, you had me believing the romance, too! A pair of deep blue eyes and we lose all common sense ? Well written and a great twist ending.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you so much Sandra! All too easy to fall for beauty!
I love the exquisite language and the surprising twist in your story, Emily. Very well done!
Thank you very much, Christer!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI loved this! Lol, you and I must of been on the same train of thought! Check out my short piece titled, “Duncan Fraser.” Cheers to a fellow horror writer! ? The last two sentences you wrote…chilling!
Oh I’ll go check it out now! Haha, cannot beat a little bit of horror, I’ve always had a love of the Supernatural kind ? I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Emily, I thought ‘what a lovely, romantic story, she’s so lucky that he was there to catch her’, then I read that last line! Brilliant twist, well done!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you so much Marianna ❤
Congratulations Emily! Loved this story, such an unexpected twist!
Congratulations, Emily. Cheers on your achievement.
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