Yesterday, Beautiful Blue-Eyed Sky!
Yesterday, beautiful blue-eyed sky!
Today, an autistic sky burns. Putrid. Vile. Threatening.
Yesterday, all was perfect. A comforting sun smiled. Sauntering hand in hand, we brimmed with love. All was so right. We were longing for marriage, a cottage and a bright future.
Today, the very atmosphere is cracked. Suddenly, the heavens spit fiery rocks. The waters boil and roil. Knots form in the land, which demonically form gaping maws of fissures. Frantically, I scream your name. Where are you? Where are you?
“Cut! Great film shot!” the Director bellows.
As the lead actor, I walk off the film set.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA wonderfully descriptive story, Margarida, with a great twist at the end! Love the expression ‘Blue-eyed sky’. And this definitely has all the ingredients of a terrific disaster movie!
It’s definitely a movie I would watch!
I agree with Linda, this was such a descriptive piece Margarida, I truly felt I was right there!
Thank you, Emily. Always wise to paint a vivid picture in the reader’s mind.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleSuch kind comments, Linda. Thank you. For some reason, my mind keeps pondering on the subject of an apocalypse. How would it happen- meteor, atmospheric shift, global war alien attack or…..? Chilly thoughts!
This story is indeed engaging. I love the flow and twist. Good write.
Thank you Thompson. I am glad that you enjoyed reading my drabble.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello, Margarida. It is very captivating. And I didn’t see the twist in the end coming. Very well done.
Thanks, Lotchie. Glad to hear I captured your attention.
You’re welcome, Margarida.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHeaven to Hell then a big ‘Phew’. You’ve squeezed so much into 100 wprds. Gripping stuff!
A drabble is a powerful way of expressing so much in a mere one hundred words. Thank you. Allan.