The Man at the Gas Station
“What’s the matter, Joan?”
“Mum, I have a pressing urge that I should get off the train and go to a hospital.”
“But, you can see the train is in motion.”
She had just finished saying the words when the train halted and the doors opened.
She got to a gas station where she met a man with blue eyes dressed in overall. He directed her to a hospital.
She narrated her encounter with the man to her mother and the doctor. He told them that the gas station has been abandoned and had not been in operation for years.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleOooh what a mysterious turn of events, Thompson! A message from beyond!
Hmmm.
Thompson, I like how you entwine everyday happenings with a spooky supernatural element.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Margarida.
Intriguing, Thompson, I’m going to be imagining all night what happens next! I’m hoping you give us a sequel. In life so many things happen by what could be coincidence but always leave us wondering…
Indeed life is full of mysteries. I hope to write a sequel soon. I had so many parts taken out to wittle it down to a 100-word story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleIt is creepy, Thompson. You made me wondering of who that man is? Is he a spirit? Or a supernatural element? Well done.
Thank you, Lotchie. Let’s say he’s an angel.
You’re welcome, Thompson. Oh! Wow. An angel sent from above.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleOh, very spooky, Thompson! So many questions to be answered! Why did she need to go to the hospital? Who was this man at the gas station wearing an overall? Had he once worked there? How is he linked with Joan? You see, you really must write a sequel now!
Oh! I’ll try.