I am wrapped in a soft, white material and I can feel a wetness on my forehead.

I open my eyes and see the minister, his eyes turned upwards as he recites something that I do not understand, because I do not yet know anything about speech.

He then looks down into my eyes, smiles and continues to speak, then looks right and left, obviously talking to people nearby.

The world changes and I am now inside the minister’s head, looking through his eyes, directly into mine, which are blue. They truly are.

I have never had that dream again.

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    Linda Rock
    Linda Rock(@linda-rock)
    1 year ago

    Oh my, very spooky, Allan! I’m imagining a christening but, of course, it could be something much more sinister! Nicely done!

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    1 year ago

    That dream was truly intriguing, Allan. Well done.

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    Reply to  Allan Neil
    1 year ago

    You are always welcome, Allan.

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    1 year ago

    Allan, I never thought that your protagonist was having a dream! I found the line ‘The world changes and I am now inside the minister’s head’, a bit scary. It left me with the question, ‘why?’ I would love to read more.

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