Wishing You
Even though Martha Karlsson is not a morning person, the best part of her work is the mornings, specifically from 7:30 to 8:00 AM.
Like yesterday morning, Martha woke up this morning hoping… “Today is the day!” She prepared breakfast while singing her favorite song. She ate it up. She was extremely careful her make-up, blond hair, and company uniform looked perfect. She got to work. Her job as a receptionist makes her the first one at the firm. She is the face of the company, and Martha knows it. That’s why she checks her make-up, blond hair, and uniform in the mirror every now and then, when possible.
But, from 7:30 to 8:00 AM, her make-up, blond hair, uniform, and loving smile belong to one and only one person: Mr. Pérez, the CEO. Not because Mr. Pérez is the CEO, or has a Ph.D., or has a mansion, or has an expensive sports car, or is, according to her, the most handsome man in the huge building, but because he is a good person, ergo, the perfect husband for her, the one God created for her.
And Mr. Pérez has noticed Martha Karlsson, her loving smile, her perfect look, and her eyes, especially, Martha’s eyes. He thinks Martha Karlsson suits his life perfectly. Not because Martha is, according to him, the most beautiful woman in the huge building, or seeks excellence in every task she’s asked to do, or expresses herself properly and intelligently, or can contribute to conversations with a fine sense of humor, but because she is a good person, ergo, the perfect wife for him, the one God created for him.
Any minute, from 7:30 to 8:00 AM, Mr. Pérez arrives.
“Good morning, Martha!”
“Good morning, Mr. Pérez!”
That’s the dialogue both allow themselves to say every morning; they’re too shy to reveal their feelings.
However, a sudden desire took control of Martha… today is the day!
“Mr. Pérez…”
“Yes, Martha?”
“I just… wish… you… an excellent day, sir.”
“Thank you, Martha. Have a great day!”
Four eyes met… maybe tomorrow will be the day.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA wonderful story, Henry, and very well written. I felt as though I was someone in the office, watching and waiting for the magic to finally happen. Tomorrow? I fear their shyness might hold them back a little longer ?
Thank you, Sandra, for your kindness and support. I’m sooo glad you “got trapped” by my story (as a witness), that gives me great feedback. Yeah, I agree with you, it’ll take a bit longer, probably. Thank you again. Blessings
Henry, I like both your office romance and the way their likes for each other are parallel.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI’m very pleased to know you liked my story. Thanks for your nice comment. Blessings
Henry – Ahh – Your story really kept me guessing. When would finally arrive the day when Martha or Mr. Pérez will reveal their true feelings?
Nice work, keep writing, and have a blessed day!
Hi Chris! Yeah, there may be a second part, it would be interesting. Amen. Thanks Chris for your nice comment and support. Blessings
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou make me smile, Henry. A beautiful romance. I wish tomorrow is the day of feelings revelation. Can I expect for the part 2?
Thank you, Lotchie. Good to know you enjoyed my story. Yeah, hopefully tomorrow will be the day… Now that you, and Chris, mentioned it, I’ll start thinking about a second part. Thanks for always supporting me. May God bless you.
You’re always welcome, Henry.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHenry, I love your story! I got so excited when Martha called Mr Pérez back, but will have to wait for part 2 ? I especially liked how you emphasized the care she took with how she appeared, by repeating the lines. I think the story flows really well. I enjoyed reading this.
Hello Marianna! We’ll need to wait a bit more to see if Martha and Mr. Pérez end up together. Thanks for your kind feedback and I am glad you liked my story. Blessings
What I enjoy most about this story is that these two romantic characters are drawn to each other because they know that each of them is a good person at heart …aside from all of the other tangible qualities they have. They are ear-marked for each other by destiny and in that special way that cannot be explained. Their shy natures really add to the tension and sweetness of this story. I… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Heather, for your great feedback… you definitely got the idea!!! And I quote: “their shy natures really add to the tension and sweetness of this story”, as you explained, “by repeating lines”, as Marianna also explained. Great! Thanks again for your support. Blessings
I like the tensions held back in your story, Henry. It’s easy to feel related to both characters and wish for one of them to say something to break the ice. We have probably all been there, feeling uncertain if one’s feelings are returned or not. Since I am Swedish, I’m curious to know about your choice of name for the female protagonist. Karlsson is 100 % Swedish. Might there be a… Read more »
Hi Christer! THANK YOU A LOT for your nice feedback…. yeah, all of us have been there. And believe it or not, it’s a Scandinavian name, indeed. I have always been interested in Scandinavian mythology and culture. On top of that, I always try to vary the names of my characters -from different cultures- so my stories get that universal background, we are one world, with no frontiers. Blessings
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleOther’s comments have said it all, Henry, an office romance that everyone wants to see come to fruition. I’m now imagining the office Christmas party when Martha and Mr Perez, intoxicated in more ways than one, throw caution to the wind when the mistletoe beckons! A really well-written, enjoyable read!
Thanks, Linda. Now all of us are curious about having a second part of this story… including me, haha. That’s a good idea: Christmas is, in my opinion, the best season of the year. Thanks again for your kindness and excellent comment. Blessings
I enjoyed that as the reader you got to see both characters feelings yet you were still able to capture that feeling of watching them from an outside perspective. A very cute read about workplace romance, Henry!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleExcellent feedback, Bella, thanks a lot. Blessings