Duncan Fraser
When I met Duncan Fraser, I knew I would do anything he asked, even if it was wrong…even if it was reprehensible.
His presence left me dazed and dim, like an opioid addict bobbing in and out of a fuzzy, murky consciousness. Even the sound of his voice dulled my will. At Duncan’s hand, I was a witless marionette hating yet craving the masterful pull of his strings.
Preceding a sickening swoon, I recall a pair of blue eyes, glacial and raw as he pulled his face away from my neck, pointy alabaster fangs dripping with blood.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHeather, you have written a powerful chilling micro fiction. Particularly enjoyed your strong
imagery in ‘like an opioid addict.” You painted Duncan Fraser so spooky!
Why thank you so much! I just read your story “Snared”and left a glowing comment. I appreciate you reading my little story!
A very gripping tale, Heather. You’ve portrayed well the power that your vampire has over his victims. Looking at your accompanying picture, I wouldn’t fancy meeting him down a dark alley. Good job!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for reading my story Carrie and your lovely comments!
Oh I love it Heather! I loved that second paragraph, I can absolutely imagine your MC just vacantly going about doing exactly what Duncan has ordered!
I can imagine a woman feeling like that about a man, Heather, luckily most of them don’t bite! What an amazing choice and use of 100 words you have given us, I am blown away!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleLinda, your kind words made my day! Glad you enjoyed my rather macabre tale. Thank you very much for reading it!
Hello, Heather. I definitely love this spooky tale in the theme “Blue Eyes” – so scary. Well done.
Thank you Lotchie! I love the horror genre. Hoping to improve my writing skills and keep practicing!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re welcome, Heather. You can do it. You’re writing skills are already good. Keep writing.