A train rumbled past outside the window, reminding her that life still existed beyond these four walls. She wondered again how long it had been since fresh air had entered this room with the stillness leaving her suffocating, not unlike being buried alive. The bulky man wheezed behind the ornately carved desk, stacked high with papers and manila files.  The only respite to the blandness of his desk was an old ochre paperweight from Uluru proclaiming proudly in midnight blue lettering that I climbed the rock.

He coughed suddenly and indicated a seat in front of his desk.

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    Margarida Brei
    Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
    1 year ago

    Lisa, you are teasing your reader with what feels like the beginning of an intriguing story. I want so much to know what is happening. Can you please write part 2?

    Thompson Emate
    Thompson Emate(@thompson-emate)
    1 year ago

    Why did he cough? Was he taken aback by her feat?

    Linda Rock
    Linda Rock(@linda-rock)
    1 year ago

    I remember this story, Lisa but re-read parts 1, 2 and 3 to remind myself of where you left it. Each episode, so intriguing, and I am still wondering what door she will choose!

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    1 year ago

    Hello, Lisa. Each episode brings excitement and leaves me intrigued about the next part. Well done, Lisa. 

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    Reply to  Lisa Gledhill
    1 year ago

    You are most welcome, Lisa.

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    1 year ago

    Lisa, this was very intriguing and I am looking forward to the next part!

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