“What’s it like to be 100, Great-Grandma?”

“Memories, Wee Lassie.” Edith closed her eyes and smiled wistfully.

“Jitterbugging and Lindy-Hopping till the sun came up. Five foot two, eyes of blue, that was me. Aye, and handsome young lads eating out of my hand – Cinderella at a non-stop ball. None of these games on your iPad, Wee Lassie. All for real.”

“Then along comes midnight, aka Adolph Hitler, and my true love flies up, up and away forever, but not before leaving me with your Grandad in my belly.”

A crystal tear ran down her cheek.

“75 years of memories.”

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    Margarida Brei
    Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
    1 year ago

    Such a tender sweet tale, Allan, incorporating history, romance and memories.

    Carrie OLeary
    Carrie OLeary(@carrie-oleary)
    1 year ago

    Such a bittersweet tale, Allan. Such beautiful memories, but then tainted by war. Are these based on real memories? Very nicely done.

    Carrie OLeary
    Carrie OLeary(@carrie-oleary)
    Reply to  Allan Neil
    1 year ago

    Looking forward to it 🙂

    Linda Rock
    Linda Rock(@linda-rock)
    1 year ago

    I love your Jitterbugging and Lindy-Hopping Edith, Allan! Sadly, her story is not rare during the war years. An emotional read.

    Thompson Emate
    Thompson Emate(@thompson-emate)
    1 year ago

    Wow! So Emotional, Allan.

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    1 year ago

    Very emotional read, Allan.

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    Reply to  Allan Neil
    1 year ago

    You’re welcome, Allan.

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    1 year ago

    Allan, this is a lovely story that serves as a reminder to the readers of how priceless the elderly are. I frequently wish I could record all the lovely memories my grandmothers used to tell us when we were little. If only we will take the time to listen to the elderly and what they’ve experienced, we could learn so much.

    Emily O'Leary
    Emily O'Leary(@emily-oleary)
    1 year ago

    A heart wrenching piece Allan, and all too familiar circumstances for the time! Lovely storytelling!

    Christer Norrlof
    Christer Norrlof(@christer-norrlof)
    1 year ago

    You certainly have packed a lot of nostalgic details into your story, Allan, especially about dances from the early 1900s. I had to go to YouTube and take a look at the kind of dance which was called the Lindy Hop, inspired by Charles Lindbergh’s Atlantic flight in 1928. It’s beautiful! Great writing!

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