A World in the Deep
A deeply unknown world. Vast in space and time. At midnight, the spineless creatures gather. They shapeshift and flow in their beauty and splendour.
He was told of this mystery in the world beneath. He decided to carry out his findings. He relied on his dexterity and expertise. At midnight, he launched into the deep to see these spineless creatures. He was taken aback by their splendour. As soon as they saw him they dispersed. Lost in the waters.
That was the last time they were seen by humans. They became invisible to them.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleOh Thompson I’m so intrigued! At first I thought perhaps they were some sort of jellyfish? But then they became invisible never to be seen again!
Beautifully written and definitely gets the imagination ticking!
Thank you, Emily. They hid from humans that’s what made them invisible.
I was totally intrigued by the deeply unknown world and the spineless creatures. That’s mysterious. You manage to play my imagination so well. Well done, Thompson.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Lotchie. It’s an honour.
You’re welcome.
The photograph is from the far north. are these the creatures of Nordic myth that no man dares to seek? Lovely mystery, Thompson.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleNo. I don’t think so. Thank you, Allan.
Beautiful atmospheric descriptions. Loved your opening lines, Thompson. Please tell me what these creatures are.
They are variant species of jellyfish.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWow! What an intriguing story, Thompson. I can understand why these beautiful creatures wanted to hide from humans… self protection. I often feel the same way! I agree with Emily, your story is beautifully written and really fires up the imagination. I loved it!
Thank you, Linda. I’m glad you like the story.