A deeply unknown world. Vast in space and time. At midnight, the spineless creatures gather. They shapeshift and flow in their beauty and splendour.

He was told of this mystery in the world beneath. He decided to carry out his findings. He relied on his dexterity and expertise. At midnight, he launched into the deep to see these spineless creatures. He was taken aback by their splendour. As soon as they saw him they dispersed. Lost in the waters.

That was the last time they were seen by humans. They became invisible to them.

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Emily O'Leary
Emily O'Leary(@emily-oleary)
1 month ago

Oh Thompson I’m so intrigued! At first I thought perhaps they were some sort of jellyfish? But then they became invisible never to be seen again!

Beautifully written and definitely gets the imagination ticking!

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
1 month ago

I was totally intrigued by the deeply unknown world and the spineless creatures. That’s mysterious. You manage to play my imagination so well. Well done, Thompson.

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Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
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1 month ago

You’re welcome.

Allan Neil
Allan Neil(@allan-neil)
1 month ago

The photograph is from the far north. are these the creatures of Nordic myth that no man dares to seek? Lovely mystery, Thompson.

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Margarida Brei
Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
1 month ago

Beautiful atmospheric descriptions. Loved your opening lines, Thompson. Please tell me what these creatures are.

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Linda Rock
Linda Rock(@linda-rock)
1 month ago

Wow! What an intriguing story, Thompson. I can understand why these beautiful creatures wanted to hide from humans… self protection. I often feel the same way! I agree with Emily, your story is beautifully written and really fires up the imagination. I loved it!

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