Dance, My Stars
Dance, it is the witching hour!
The devil’s hour means supernatural beings are at their most powerful.
So dance my children, my stars, to keep them at bay.
Glisten! Shine bright! Glow! This is your mother Midnight asking you to radiant colour. We do not want evil to enter the world.
We must protect the rainbow, butterfly and unicorn life of earth!
Excellent work, you knocked a witch into oblivion! You disintegrated that demon by sparkling!
You gave that ghost a taste of his own boo! Good, a witching hour baby is frightening the ghouls away by his heavy sobs.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA lovely, lyrical celebration of night, stars, and good triumphing over evil. We loved the line “We must protect the rainbow, butterfly and unicorn life of earth!” A memorable title and a unique take on the midnight prompt.
This is a deep-seated story. The spiritual world is indeed vast. Who is the witching hour baby?
A witching hour baby is one that cries a lot. Thanks as always for your feedback, Thompson.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWow! I really enjoyed your supernatural tale, Margarida. Well done.
Thanks for your generous comments, Lotchie. It is a tale of ouija board meets Science Fiction.
You’re welcome. Oh! Love it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleLovely story, as sparkly as its subject. Love it Margarida.
Flatterer! Thank you Allan, for your bounteous praise.
Margarida, I don’t know how I missed this little gem the first time around! I’m glad the Voice Team posted stories for us to read along with the new contest. I have more time now than I often do when a contest is underway, so I get to read in my leisure. This story is lovely – very poetic and hopeful. We certainly need help in overcoming the ghouls and witches, whatever… Read more »
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleFuji, thanks for referring to my mini fiction as a “gem.” Like yourself, I am glad that we have a cross section of quality writing to read over and be inspired by. Voice.Club has stated many new rules in this new prompt on “Transformation” – only one entrance each, no memoirs, publication one week after the end of the contest. To be honest, I much preferred stories being published when they were… Read more »
Hello, Margarida. It’s nice to see and read again your fiction. You are really a treasure on this site. How are you?
Thanks, Lotchie. May many blessings come to you for your kind praise.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re welcome. Thank you for sending your blessings to me. I appreciate it. God bless you always.
Thank you for your kind words, Lotchie. I hope too that Midnight keeps horrors from entering our world,
You’re always welcome.
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