I have many different names. You may call me what you like when we meet. I assure you, we will.

Sea-spray hangs in every gust as I walk through the small northern town. I have some time before my next appointment, so I do as these people do. I take shelter in the local pub. You might think it strange, but here, with life fresh in the thick tumble of voices, I feel full. I am nothing without these people.

In return, I let them see me as they need.

The woman behind the bar, for instance, with purple streaking through her dark ponytail like a rare September sunset. She sees me as a doctor, a man with a tight chin and thin lips that carry nothing but bad news. I can feel it, can feel the blazer she thinks I wear tight around my shoulders. She avoids my gaze, her eyes downturned.

Her father was the same when I met him, his eyes fixed on the hospital lino flooring.

I look over at a man nursing an empty glass. His dark eyes watch the game on the screen, anticipation bleeding through his taut shoulders. I sense he sees me as a younger man, a boy with a careless smile and reckless grin. One who never lingers, always keeps the engine running faster, faster.

His excitement is infectious. I laugh with him, cheer with him, clasp his shoulders when somebody scores. Temporary bliss lights his eyes.

His daughter had the same eyes when I took her hand, pulled her from the crumpled mess of her blue Mini Cooper.

The evening wind is cold when I leave, calling winter forth with every breath. Yet my cloak is still, rusty leaves undisturbed by my tread. The hum of life fades, and my steps are silent among the cobbles.

My charge is here; I hear his rasping breaths before I see him. He falls still, as if he is simply sleeping in the alley. Idle leaves scratch across my feet. When he wakes, his unseeing eyes will see me as I am.

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8 months ago

Very thoughtfully written. The line “I let them see me as they need” sums up the piece. It was done so subtlety, incorporating pain and joy both with each character introduced. This story stays with the reader long after the reading is done.

Margarida Brei
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8 months ago

Deserving win Holly. Well done! You go girl!

Margarida Brei
Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
8 months ago

Welcome to Voice.Club, Holly. An intriguing chilly story. Are you talking about death?

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
8 months ago

So intriguing, Holly. I really enjoyed it. I have so many identities in my mind, like a spirit, grim reaper, or angel sent from above. Very well-crafted. Well done, Holly. Congratulations on your powerful first story. Keep on writing.  

A warm welcome to voice club.

Preston Randall
Preston Randall(@preston-randall)
8 months ago

I really enjoyed this story, especially its original take on “the Grim Reaper.” The characterizations all felt true and the story had a well-constructed flow to a great finish. Well done!

Allan Neil
Allan Neil(@allan-neil)
8 months ago

Hello and welcome, Holly. Very well written with enough left to interpretation, The ending made me shiver a bit, as these days I think I can hear you creeping up behind me. Well done.

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
7 months ago

Wow. A well deserved win, Holly. Congratulations.

Heather Chrzanowski
Heather Chrzanowski(@heather-chrzanowski)
7 months ago

Excellent story. Congratulations! I really enjoyed reading this piece. I especially loved your opening paragraph. Holy cow, this pulled me right in.

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