She’d waited all day for him to come home so she could break the good news.

But, as soon as he arrived, he broke into a rant.

“The house is a mess!  And you, you’re not the woman I married, you’ve let yourself go!”

Is it any wonder, she thought, with five kids under the age of ten and you never lifting a finger to help.

“I want a divorce!” his parting words, on leaving.

Shocked, she imagined life without him, for her and the kids.

Removing the winning EuroMillions lottery ticket from her pocket… she broke into a smile.

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    Carrie OLeary
    Carrie OLeary(@carrie-oleary)
    11 months ago

    Love this, Linda. Sounds like your protagonist has a pretty awesome life ahead of her. Definitely sounds like she has something to smile about 🙂

    Thompson Emate
    Thompson Emate(@thompson-emate)
    11 months ago

    Oh! Linda. This is a lovely story. At first, I was emotional thinking of how she would cope with the quintuplets but in the end, I smiled. This deserves a win. A well-crafted story. Well done.

    Christer Norrlof
    Christer Norrlof(@christer-norrlof)
    11 months ago

    Now, there’s a twist I didn’t expect! You last line made me burst out with laughter. And a big smile, of course. Very well done!

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    11 months ago

    Wow! Lovely. Your twist, in the end, is like a bar of chocolate that makes me smile and want more. I am surprised. I can also sense the greatest regret of her husband. Well done. 

    Lotchie Carmelo
    Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
    Reply to  Linda Rock
    11 months ago

    You’re welcome, Linda.

    Melissa Taggart
    Melissa Taggart(@melissa-taggart)
    11 months ago

    Here I am cheering for the protaginist, Linda! She certainly deserves these winnings. The poor thing coming from a loveless home makes me think that it may take more than money to make her whole. But this is certainly a good start! Great work.

    Preston Randall
    Preston Randall(@preston-randall)
    11 months ago

    This is such a great relatable story. We all know a version of that miserable, awful guy, somewhere, and to see him finally receive the short end of the stick is just soooo satisfying. Thanks for giving all of us something to smile about.

    Last edited 11 months ago by Preston Randall
    Margarida Brei
    Margarida Brei(@margarida-brei)
    11 months ago

    Absolutely loved this story. The lazy demanding husband versus the quiet wife. How clever of you to end on the word “smile.”

    Marianna Pieterse
    Marianna Pieterse(@marianna-pieterse)
    11 months ago

    When I read the line where the husband asked your protagonist for a divorce, it really frustrated me. It made me think that he was choosing ‘the easy way out’, instead of actually trying to make things better, but reading the last line I smiled too! If he’d known he certainly would have stayed and pretended to be nice until the money was squandered, I have no doubt. Another great story, Linda!

    Heather Chrzanowski
    Heather Chrzanowski(@heather-chrzanowski)
    11 months ago

    Oh yes, this story was awesome! Awesome! Really fabulous.

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