It is raining when she slips into the kaleidoscope. The muted sound of raindrops on the roof catches her off guard, and looking up, she finds herself falling through a myriad of bright colors. The kaleidoscope’s mirrors shatter the colors into miniature rainbows, truly kalos eidos scopos, beautiful shapes to look at. “Glory be to God for dappled things” flashes through her mind. To the left, purple and blue rhombi pulse hypnotically, while a glance to the right reveals an ever-emerging arrangement of multi-colored fractals. Pied beauty indeed! Gerard Manley Hopkins now juxtaposed with M. C. Escher! The sight is breath taking; she can’t pull her eyes away from it all.
It isn’t just that the colors are overwhelming, it’s the contrast between where she had been to where she is now. It is Dorothy leaving Kansas and entering Oz.
As this thought enters her mind, she feels the despondency of the last few days (weeks? years?) fall away to be replaced by a warmth which encompasses her body.
The colors suddenly summon synesthesia. Colors birth music: reds are Mussorgsky’s Great Gates of Kiev; yellows, pinks, and lilacs elicit Grieg’s Morning from Peer Gynt Suite; and blues become Louis Armstrong’s What a Wonderful World.
This should cause chaotic cacophony, but instead the songs seem to encourage, to reaffirm each other, to merge into a harmonious blend of joy and wonder. Instead of overwhelming, it only completes. So, this is how life should be! Joy surges through her as she closes her eyes in contentment and accepts the changes within her.
The joy manifests itself into a smile which stays with her as her sliding becomes a slow spin, lightly settling her onto the ground while rain falls gently around her.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA fall into another world worthy of Alice in Wonderland. We watch as colors and associations magically transform a dull day into a joyful adventure. A transformation deftly dramatized and beautifully, poetically written.
Susan, I love how you described the shattered colours! This sounds like an excellent beginning to a longer story. I’m curious to see what happens next!
Marianna, thank you for your comments and for the suggestion. I had not considered extending this into a longer story, but now that the thought is in my mind . . .Thanks again.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWhat an incredibly beautiful and colorful story, Susan! Your protagonist seems to enjoy a multifaceted experience, including colors, music and poetry. I am curious to know more about her physical situation. Is she really sliding through a big kaleidoscope or is this a thought experiment? Thanks for the enlightening details you so generously give the reader!
My original thought was to surround the protagonist with beauty in every available form, and immersion by kaleidoscope seemed like a good start. As this is physically impossible, I suppose we must settle with what we can create in our minds. Would we could all view life as she does. Thank you for reading and commenting on my story.
Susan, welcome back to Voice.Club. You have a magical way with words; you made me feel the colours, as though I too were entering Oz! I love how you seamlessly introduce literary and musical figures in a musical and lilting way.
I really enjoyed your fast fiction for taking me on a magical colourful journey!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for your uplifting comments. One of the greatest pleasures of beauty is to share it with others; your response shows me that you receive and appreciate the joys of literature, music and colors. Thank you for reading my story.
Susan, this is a beautiful story. I love the ending of how she allowed the rain to fall on her with a smile on her face. I love your use of words like, “chaotic cacophony” and “harmonious blend of joy and wonder”. Well done.
Thank you for your comments. In the throes of beauty everything, even rain, makes us smile. I have always enjoyed playing with words. I’m glad this comes through in your reading of my word choices. Thank you again for reading my story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHello, Susan. I am glad to read again a story from you. It is very colorful read. I am having fun with the imagery of different colors and the sounds that makes it more beautiful in our imagination. Well done.
Thank you, Lotchie. Imagery is a very simple but strong way to share our emotions. It makes for a fuller, more personal story and it’s something I look for both in my reading and in my writing. Thank you again for your comments and for reading my story.
You’re most welcome, Susan. And congratulations on a well-deserved win.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThis was a beautifully written story, Susan. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Thank you Melissa for reading and commenting on my story. I enjoyed writing it as sharing my love of beauty with others also fulfills me.
Thanks to everyone who read and voted for me. I am honored.
This is such a lovely story, Susan. Those of us who love colors, music, poems and rain now want to find our own kaleidoscopes to fall into! After several repeat readings – for the pure joy of it – this has become one of my favorite stories. Thanks for all the beauty, and congratulations on your much deserved win!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for your uplifting comments. May we all keep searching for our own kaleidoscope by reading, listening, then sharing, As Mary Oliver says, “Instructions for living a life. Pay attention. Be astonished. Tell about it.” All we are doing is telling about it. Thanks to everyone.
Congratulations on your super win, Susan. You took me on a magical mystery tour of delightful colours.
Thank you for reading and commenting on my story. I am honored that so many people enjoy it. Thanks again.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA gorgeous story, Susan – congratulations on your win! But even more importantly, thank you for writing a wondrous tale which reminds all of us how important beauty is in our lives. I love all the references to colors and poetry. I also loved how you told us the origin of the word kaleidoscope – so meaningful. And the music! You mentioned some of my favorite pieces, from Mussorgsky to Edvard Grieg… Read more »
Thank you, Julie. And thanks for the Louis Armstrong – it is wonderful and so inspiring.
Congratulations Susan on your well-deserved win. A lovely story.
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Beautiful! This was lovely to read. Congratulations!
Thank you for reading and enjoying my story and for your congratulations.
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