Matthew McCauley’s Diary
Once again we come, crossing the blue water that surrounds our summer home. Three generations descend in a cloud of luggage, food and supplies. Once the boats have dropped us off and departed, we’re alone, isolated on our island.
We begin the now familiar opening litany.
“We honor and remember Julian.” Julian drowned in the cove four years ago.
“Simon.” The year after Julian’s drowning, Simon went exploring the cliff caves and died from a bee sting.
“Bella.” She was found lifeless in the woods two years ago, her eyes wide with wonder.
“Little Tonio.” He disappeared one night last year, his empty cot just yards away from his sleeping parents.
“And this year, who?”
“Come,” says Uncle Hiram, moving toward the house. We follow, spellbound by music we can barely hear, longing for something we don’t understand.
Thousand Islands Police Station
“They’re back,” Inspector Coleman sighs. “Hiram just won’t listen. ‘Stay away,’ I warned him last summer. But here he is again, with his entire family. And one of those McCauleys is a murderer.”
“Respectfully sir, I don’t think…” Kanti tries to speak, but the Inspector silences him.
“We have irrefutable evidence. The McCauleys are alone on the island every summer.” He reads the case files.
“Experienced swimmer Julian drowns in a cove as still and safe as bathwater.
“Simon, a man with life-threatening allergies, is found in the caves without his EpiPen.
“Bella, a young woman described as exceptionally timid, ventures into the woods alone.
“Little Tonio is still missing.”
“But sir, they are not alone. The island spirits …”
“Enough of that!” the Inspector shouts.
Song of the Island
The cave flickers with candlelight, as Simon’s rich baritone leads the chorus.
Beautiful lands, marvelous lands –
A thousand pieces of Paradise
Among the bright waters.
We are the guardians of shorelines, caves, and woodlands
We welcome our long-lost brothers and sisters
With gifts of singing!
Tonio listens, entranced. His Spirit-Mother teaches him the last verse.
Come share our home, our world
Our own special island
This shining piece of Paradise
Among the bright waters.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleInitially wanting to stay on the island to join in the families’ remembrance, one finds oneself “longing for something we don’t understand”. Kanti, the Inspector’s assistant, senses the spirits are benevolent. Has he heard the Song of the Island? Could we? In this world today mankind needs an island respite such as this.

Lovely picture! And truly your story is a spellbound that strongly captured and fascinated my imagination and emotion. Well done, Fuji.
Thank you for your kind words, Lotchie, and for reading my story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleCongratulations on your win, Fuji. Job well done.
A unique tale and enjoyable read, Fuji. I suppose that if you are going to become a spirit, a paradise island is the best place for it!
Thank you, Carrie! I became intrigued by the Thousand Islands, which straddle upstate New York, US and Ontario, Canada. Individual families often purchase one island and use it as a summer retreat. There are also many folktales and legends of spirits and ghosts among the native tribes in this area. My character Kanti is from one of the tribes, and is able to see beyond the material world.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleFascinating story Fuji full of mystery.
Thank you, Julian. I enjoyed writing this story!
Oh, spooky in a gentle quiet way. It is as though both the family and spirits welcome death.
Should there be closed quotations after “Little Tonio is still missing.”
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for catching that missing quotation mark, Margarida! I asked Voice Team to change it; I believe it is correct now. I was a little surprised at your interpretation. I didn’t think of the family as welcoming death, so much as there being a very fine line between the two worlds. The family always heard the spirits singing, although they didn’t know the source of the music. Like many of us,… Read more »
There aren’t enough words to describe how much I enjoyed your story, Fuji! I find it a fascinating mix of magical folklore and police procedural, the unexplained and magical clashing with the reality. I guess the police will be stumped and all the family will be extinct, then the legend will begin! Loved it!
Well, Greene, you just made my day. I’m so glad you thoroughly enjoyed this story. See my comments to Carrie about a bit of the real-life background for this Thousand Islands setting. I love what you said about “then the legend will begin”. There are so many legends of this kind in upstate New York and Ontario, Canada, especially among the native people – the five tribes of the Iroquois. I love… Read more »
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