
If I Can’t Have Him, No One Can
Delilah stood beside one of the buffet tables, her cheeks red with rage. “No!” she screamed again, stamping her foot for emphasis. “It isn’t right. She’s a servant—Cinderella, my mother’s kitchen rat. She’s a no one; it’s my mother who is the rightful Lady Ashworth.”
The entire ballroom fell silent, and the excitement of a moment ago diminished to an uncomfortable hush.
“I won’t have it!” yelled Delilah. She pushed into a nearby waiter who had been carving a large ham, snatching the knife out of his hand.
Shocked, he made a grab for her, but she was already barrelling across the ballroom as fast as her long blue skirts would allow. The guests gasped in confusion, stunned and terrified, as they were roughly pushed aside, backing away from this hellion who was unrecognisable as a lady of quality.
“If I can’t have him, no one can!” she screeched, and before anyone could comprehend what was happening, she threw herself towards Prince Séamus and plunged the knife into him, just below his heart. She pulled it out, dropping it to the floor and staggering backwards, horror written all over her face.
For one moment, he stood statuesque, then slowly crumpled to his knees as scarlet blood seeped between his fingers.
“No!” wailed Eleanora. “No, no, no, Shay, stay with me.” She threw herself to her knees, catching him and lowering him to her lap, trying to stem his blood with her own hands. “Don’t leave me, Shay. I need you. I love you. I can’t live in this world without you.” Her head snapped up, her gaze finding Delilah. “Why do you hate me so? What have I ever done to you?”
The King and Queen fell to their knees at either side of their son, both of them sobbing along with Eleanora as Shay’s eyes fluttered closed.
Eleanora fell across him. Her best friend, the only man she ever loved, had been stolen away by her stepsister. The tips of her hair began to glow with a lick of phoenix flame as her tears poured into his wound.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThe order of Eleanora’s stories is:
1 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53431/2023-zengarden-01-the-birth-of-a-legend
2 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53534/2023-zengarden-01-kitchen-rat
3 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53555/2023-zengarden-01-no-place-to-go
4 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/52667/2023-flash-02-a-few-stolen-moments
5 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53183/2023-zengarden-01-the-phoenix-curse
6 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/52950/2023-zengarden-01-phoenix-rising
7 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53332/2023-zengarden-01-if-i-cant-have-him-no-one-can
I won’t be adding anymore of her stories to Voice.club as I’m working on putting them all together for my book of fairytale retellings. Thank you so much for reading, and hopefully enjoying her story 🙂
Hi Voice-Team. When you get a minute will you put the inverted comma and comma in the title please ‘If I Can’t Have Him, No One Can’ to match the picture. Thank you 😊
Done.
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Author’s Note – This is the answer to the question people have asked about the ‘No’ in ‘Phoenix Rising’. Enjoy!
What a dramatic addition to the story, Carrie, and one I’m sure will satisfy those readers waiting on it. I so love the words ‘she was already barrelling across the ballroom as fast as her long blue skirts would allow’ – you can’t get more descriptive than that! But once again, you have left us on the edge of our seats – this time wondering if Shay will survive! Fabulous writing!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you, Linda, glad you enjoyed this instalment. I had immense fun writing this one despite the ending.
Hello Carrie – I am enjoying your Eleanora stories. The comment you added, listing the stories in their correct order, helps a lot. I was getting confused. You did, however, misspell “Eleanora” in the comment. Carrie, I hope that someday soon you will go back to your old standard of pictures. The last two pictures of yours that I really loved were the one for the Sea Fever story and the one… Read more »
Hi Julie, thanks for commenting. Yes I noticed I misspelled Eleanora in my comment, but unfortunately there isn’t an option to edit once you’ve posted the comment. I’m glad you’re enjoying the stories. I’m sorry you don’t like the pictures I’m using. I go to a lot of effort, often combining two or three photographs and hand drawing some elements before running it through AI to try and get a picture that… Read more »
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Thank you. That’s much appreciated. I know how much work you do behind the scenes, so didn’t like to put that on you too 🙂
Such drama, jealousy and malice! So I am assuming that her Phoenix tears will heal the Prince!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleShhh! Don’t tell everyone. They might not all know the mythology 😂
Wow! I am a fan of your Eleanora stories, Carries. And finally I now get the answer of who and why shouted “No.” on your previous chapter. What a lovely read. Its like I am watching my favorite fantasy movie on a television. On this series, I highlight the last sentence, like Margarida I am assuming that too.
Thank you, I’m so happy that you are enjoying Eleanora’s story, Lotchie. I’m working on a book of fantasy retellings of fairytales, so it gives me hope that it will be well-received. There’s still a lot of Eleanora’s story to write, but I have started working on a Hansel and Gretel story too. There are just so many ideas buzzing around in my head!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI am excited to read that.
To be continued…I HOPE! 😮
I am writing the full story, Lady of the Ashes which I intend to publish in a book of fairytale retellings. I can’t give everything away now, can I. I have already written the scene that immediately follows this and had enormous fun writing it!
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