Eleanora cried out in pain as her stepmother flung her down the last few steps into the dark kitchen. She stumbled and fell into the hearth, the tips of her hair singeing from the heat of the flame.
“There is no longer a younger Lady Ashworth. As far as I’m concerned, she died with her father,” crowed her stepmother. “Only myself and my daughters are of import in this house. And your services are no longer required,” she added, staring between the three kitchen maids.
“You can’t do that,” cried Eleanora, mortified by her stepmother’s behaviour, her tear-stained face streaked with cinders. “This is their home.”
“I can and I will! Your place is down here as a kitchen rat.”
“Look at her,” giggled Dahlia, “she’s all covered in ashes now.” She was always unpleasant when both her mother and twin sister were with her. “Ashy Eleanora.”
“No!” squealed Delilah, a look of spiteful delight on her face, “Cinderella! From now on, that can be her name. Eleanora is dead to us after all, so we can’t keep using her old name, can we?”
Stepmother clapped her hands. “Come, come, girls. We can’t be slumming in the kitchen. If we hold up Cook, dinner will be late.” If she knew that the old cook’s name was Hester, she never acknowledged it.
Eleanora picked herself up from the kitchen hearth and ran to the old cook, inhaling the scents of freshly-baked bread and spiced apple as she was folded into a warm embrace.
“There, there, child,” said Hester, gently, “he were a good man, your papa. I don’t know what’s going on here, but I’ll do my best to care for you.”
Hester looked across at the three weeping kitchen maids. “I’m sorry, girls.” She was grateful they were all local girls and had homes to go to. “I’ll make sure you get good references. Now,” she clapped her hands, her voice falsely bright, “how about some nice apple pie, straight from the oven, to cheer us up? Them lot,” she said, pointing upstairs, “can have left-over tapioca pudding!”
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThe order of Eleanora’s stories is:
1 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53431/2023-zengarden-01-the-birth-of-a-legend
2 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53534/2023-zengarden-01-kitchen-rat
3 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53555/2023-zengarden-01-no-place-to-go
4 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/52667/2023-flash-02-a-few-stolen-moments
5 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53183/2023-zengarden-01-the-phoenix-curse
6 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/52950/2023-zengarden-01-phoenix-rising
7 – https://voice.club/story/fiction/53332/2023-zengarden-01-if-i-cant-have-him-no-one-can
I won’t be adding anymore of her stories to Voice.club as I’m working on putting them all together for my book of fairytale retellings. Thank you so much for reading, and hopefully enjoying her story 🙂
So funny that the cook will serve her mistress cold tapioca rather than fresh apple pie!
You never know, Hester may have enough cook’s pride to warm it up!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThis story is Eleanora aged twelve, shortly after her father has died. I’ve written another story that immediately follows this, so will wait and see if it is published on the site before changing the the reading order again.
What a beautiful picture of Eleanora on her 12 years of age. So glad to know that Hester is there to take care of Eleanora. I enjoyed it. Well done.
Thank you, Lotchie, I’m keeping my fingers crossed that the follow-up story to this gets through because that will be the last of the Eleanora ones. If anyone wants to read the rest, they’ll have to wait for my book of fairytale retellings. I’m working on a dystopian Hansel and Gretel retelling in conjunction with this one.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI’ll look forward to that, Carrie.
A beautiful read, Carrie. I love your fairy tale retellings. I’ll take my time to read it sequentially.
Thanks, Thompson. ‘No Place to Go’ is the next one chronologically. I’m glad you are liking the story; it’s nice if it’s enjoyed by everyone, not just women!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA new glance at an old tale…how refreshing is that? Loved it…keep going!
All of Eleanora’s stories are shown in order in the pinned post. It’s been so much fun putting my own spin on it