“Do you trust me?”

There it was, his choice. He looked from her outstretched hand to the dark abyss staring right at them. This is where their path led; a gloomy void straight from medieval depictions of the gates to hell, only missing the flames and the screams of tortured souls. Maybe hearing cries and screams would be more comforting than this deafening silence.

He should just turn around, walk away and forget all this ever happened. But instead he took a deep breath before grabbing her hand, closing his eyes and together they stepped into nothingness.

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Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
1 year ago

Hi, Christiane. I love how you open up this story with a question, “Do you trust me”. It is very engaging. Good job, and I hope to read more from you.

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