Endure and Sing
Once upon a time, there was a little rat. His fur was the color of dust and his nose was always twitching from excitement. While the rest of his neighboring animals were graceful and pretty, his looks caused fear, especially with that red scar across his face.
However, what he lacked in appearance, he made up in talent. He could sing better than the most sweet-voiced nightingale. His voice, unfortunately, wasn’t appreciated by anyone else since the other animals couldn’t stand the sight of him.
His big chance finally came in the form of a talent contest. His hairless tail was wagging with happiness as he made his way to the competition site. The line for the contestants was endless and he waited for days before his turn finally arrived. He began making his way inside when he picked up some whispers from behind him.
“Look at that ugly rat. I feel sick just staring at him.”
“What is he doing here? He doesn’t belong at a talent show.”
“I bet his talent is being gross.”
The words flew into his ears as his eyes watered. He needed to get out of there quick. He didn’t want to hear any more. His legs, however, didn’t let him move.
His tiny hands slapped his face, instantly bringing him back to his usual self. These animals had their opinions but so did he. And he, in contrast, believed that it didn’t matter how he looked. He could still win over everyone’s heart with just his melodic voice.
He walked through the tall giraffes and the elegant Persian cats with his head held up high until he stood in front of the microphone and opened his mouth.
A standing ovation. Those were the only words that could describe the audience’s response to his performance. Every single animal was cheering, begging to hear one more song.
The little ugly rat looked straight into the judges’ eyes as they clapped louder than anyone else. He had done it; he had the courage and held on till the end. And it was worth it.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHi Katy, don’t we all feel like the rat in your story at times! We all have our own challenges. I love the way your story depicts self belief.
Thank you, I’m so glad that you could easily put yourself in the little hero’s shoes and reflect upon his self-confidence!
Such a sweet tale – and with a good moral to the story. I thought it was a little like a modern-day addition to Aesop’s fables. Wasn’t Aesop also a Greek storyteller?
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you for your kind words! It’s such an honour to have my name mentioned in the same sentence with this legendary Greek storyteller.
Inspirational piece. Am glad you picked the rat to be the protagonist in your story, and a rat which beats all odds for that matter. Nice to read a story where the rat isn’t the bad guy.
Thank you for taking the time to comment and convey your thoughts on the story. I’m glad that the little protagonist was able to reach you!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleWow! This is a good story! Really good to read to little kids, the moral of the story is great. I’ll read this to my younger family members (one of which is in my profile pic)! You should write more stories like these and publish a book of them all. It would probably be successful. I would definitely refer it! : D
Thank you so much for the feedback! I pray that the young readers will be inspired by the story and build self-confidence. I only hope that your family members will adopt a lifestyle similar to the little hero’s.
Your story inspired me to keep going no matter how discouraging it gets. At times I feel like the same “rat” you have mentioned in your story.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI created this little hero because I hoped that it would stir up courage to everyone. I’m so happy that the story managed to reach you!
A beautiful story! I was reminded of seeing Paul Potts and Susan Boyle on Britain’s Got Talent. Sniggering in the audience, judges’ frowns…then, magic! I still get goose bumps thinking of them again when I read your story. I think it would make a lovely children’s book, one that adults would also love 🙂
Thank you for taking the time to comment and for the compliment! The story reflects on all the talented artists out there that have the courage to face the audience, no matter how hard that can be.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleA really nice one with a wonderful story line. I can see why this was picked from the midst of others. Well done.
Thank you, it’s truly an honor to hear you say that!
In my neighboring country Denmark, we have the classical storyteller Hans-Christian Andersen. Your sweet story reminds me of his fairy tale called The Ugly Duckling. In a charming way, you tell the story about an animal who stands up for himself and beats the odds. Very inspiring!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleI do actually know of Hans-Christian Andersen and I have to say it’s such an honor to hear that! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and for commenting your thoughts.
Hi Katy, it really does add an extra dimension to hear your story read aloud – I enjoyed this reading by Leena. Eric.
I’m really glad to hear that! Leena Auckel did an amazing job and I’m so grateful.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThank you Katy… I liked your inspiring story so much that I had to read it aloud.
I wish all of us were more like this little mouse! His confidence and courage are really remarkable and I hope we all learn a lesson from this story!
That’s exactly what I hope! I wish that many readers are inspired by the story and change their life!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleThat is really inspiring!
All of us happen to get involved in a similar situation and, like the little hero, we have to find the courage to fight our way out of the tough situation. Congratulations on a beautifully written story!
Thank you so much!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleAn inspirational story, Katy, and a well-deserved win. The title resonates for all who rise above exterior interpretations with patience and creativity. I’ve kept this story as a template to learn from, so I can write to both children and adults, at once.
Thank you so much. It’s truly an honor to hear that my story is used as a template to help others write.
How I wish I could be like the rat. Perhaps we can all try to be a bit more like the little hero. Then, all of us will become better people.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re right, we should all try to be more confident!
Such a lovely tale, that clearly emphasized courage. I wish I had a talent and courage like this rat. It is a very nice story to read at night to my children. Good job Katy.
Thank you so much!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleIt is an honor to hear you say it’s a nice story to read at night to your children. If you do so, I really hope they’ll like it and be inspired by the little rat!
They enjoyed it, Katy. But I made a little translation to our native language so that they can understand and be inspired.
That is really lovely to hear! Thank you for sharing my story with your children.
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleYou’re welcome, Katy. Your story is worth sharing.
Katy, I have been so impressed with your comments, which are insightful and full of wisdom, that I looked up your Star page. There I found a wealth of stories including this little gem. Lovely story!
You cannot imagine how much your words mean to me, Julie! Thank you!
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To Leave Comments - Please SignIn with GoogleHaving read all your stories, it’s a real honour to hear you say such kind words.
Hello again Katy. I just listened to your story, read by the amazing @Leena Auckel. What a treat! I hope you will write more stories like this, and have Leena read them.