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Nottinghamshire
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Edwinstowe

Garden Serenade

Goldfinch

You chitter chatter everyday,
I’ve no idea what you say.
Your song to me is like a balm,
My racing mind begins to calm.
You flit and jig so I can see,
Your perch high up there in my tree.

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Fuji
Fuji(@fuji)
1 year ago

This is so lovely, Carrie. The photo is absolutely perfect, showing all the delicate coloring of this incredible bird. And the poem is icing on the cake. Your garden must be a paradise. We are all lucky to be sharing it with you, through your amazing pictures.

Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
1 year ago

So lovely and amazing photo, Carrie. And your poem description makes the photograph more alive. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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Lotchie Carmelo
Lotchie Carmelo(@lotchie-carmelo)
1 year ago

Wow. This is a very nice photograph and lovely. And the poem description adds more color to it. 

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Eric Radcliffe
Eric Radcliffe(@eric-radcliffe)
1 year ago

What a great snap Carrie, did you wait to get that particular shot, or did you just run to get your camera?

Daisy Blacklock
Daisy Blacklock(@daisy-blacklock)
1 year ago

Goldfinches are beautiful animals. In your poem, I especially love the line when you wrote ‘your song to me is like a balm’. I can almost imagine their song as the poem.

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